Eileen Manassian Poet Diamante

Journey From Reality

REALITY
                                                  factual, undeniable
                                          tormenting, questioning, binding
                                          concrete, lucid, wispy, ethereal
                                          refreshing, tantalizing, liberating
                                              surreal, passion dipped
                                                         DREAMS

PS......I JUST wrote this and decided it enter it into Dr Ram's contest when LO and BEHOLD....I find the VERY same words put there as an example..Reality....and Dreams.....HOW STRANGE IS THAT???????? Well, since I HONESTLY had not seen that before writing mine, I'm going to keep this up...but obviously, can't join the contest....Imagine!

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Liam Mcdaid November 1, 2013 at 4:30 PM a very beautifully crafted piece eileen

Richard D Seal October 31, 2013 at 8:25 PM "I have seen, the fantasy queen, I told myself that I would feel life, I made a good start, then it all fell apart, I don't like, the real life". Lines from The Rock Follies. This a beautiful write my little Desert Orchid. Still, out of dreams comes reality. Take care, Richard Eileen Manassian November 1, 2013 at 3:38 PM What a profound post, Mr Seal...You have intrigued me NO END! Never heard of Rock Follies...I'm so curious now...The Fantasy Queen...what's she like???? Lovely post, Richard...Thanks for the visit! :) No teasing today???? ;)

Ken Carroll October 31, 2013 at 4:03 PM Hi Eileen, Very creative... Ken Eileen Manassian November 1, 2013 at 3:37 PM Thanks, Ken....glad you liked it! :)

Nette Onclaud October 31, 2013 at 12:39 PM hmmm.. join, eileen.. this is a delight.. ask dr, ram.. go!..huggs to you,,:) Eileen Manassian November 1, 2013 at 3:36 PM Thanks, Nette....I appreciate the comment and the visit.....We'll see! Perhaps I will enter another one! Leave it a surprise! ;)

Richard Lamoureux October 31, 2013 at 9:29 AM Hi Eileen, I checked my mail but there was no message from you??? Eileen Manassian November 1, 2013 at 3:35 PM That's all solved now!

Poet Tacito October 31, 2013 at 9:20 AM Great minds, Eileen. :) Eileen Manassian November 1, 2013 at 3:35 PM Awwwwwwww....isn't that sweet! :) Thanks, Drake!!!!

Richard Lamoureux October 31, 2013 at 8:52 AM Listen to Dr. Ram, the Doctor knows best! Eileen Manassian November 1, 2013 at 3:34 PM :) Do they now? Well, I will give it due consideration, Richard...Thanks for the visit.

Demetrios Trifiatis October 31, 2013 at 8:50 AM Exhilarating, captivating, descriptive, imaginative and purely dreamy! Good luck Eileen! 7 Eileen Manassian November 1, 2013 at 3:34 PM What an amazing string of adjectives, my dear poet. I'm so thankful for your visit and kind remarks! :) Me Agapi

Dr.Ram Mehta October 31, 2013 at 12:22 AM I think you can post it, may the title or the first/last nouns are the same, Eileen Eileen Manassian November 1, 2013 at 3:31 PM You are very kind, Dr Ram. I think I will post a diamante I wrote some time ago...Just so there will be some difference...or perhaps come up with a new one! :) Thanks anyway for the visit....