Journey From Failure To Success

It was the worst division of life,
I was afraid and feeling lonely.
No one seemed to be friendly,
Even, I was entirely different from others.

I asked what the negative factor was,
Why I was a big jerk for others,
One after another, I had to face difficulties.
Heaven was there but no vacancy for me.

Daily routines did not stop for a while,
No time to think about expectations,
No time to wonder its severe consequences,
God was disappeared.

Mostly, I kept quiet and looked dull,
Thinking of my past failures
When I remembered,
How my life took a huge turn,
A thrill of terror went through my body.

I could see my life getting damaged,
And I found no ointment for it.
I was exhausted of it,
I was vanished.

My mind had already crossed its limitations,
There was a queue of failure thoughts.
I cried and begged:
To stop thinking, let me sleep for a while.

The day came, I was left alone,
Standing on my house roof
Nightly sky was deep and dreary.
Suddenly, a little star sparkled,
Sprinkled all over the sky
I felt as if it touched my heart.

The lost hope was seen inside the stolen heart,
That changed the whole mind.
If a little one could bright in the darker world,
Then why I was not like that?

My life took an another passage,
I am remembering the harder previous days,
When I was a struggler
Now I believe in unsteadily fate,
I believe in me.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/12/2010 1:39:00 AM
THANKS FRIENDS FOR LIKING MY POEMS.... ITS VERY GOOD SITE FOR POEMS...
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Date: 6/11/2010 1:29:00 PM
very well said. very inspirational. keep up the good work.
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Date: 6/11/2010 12:45:00 PM
Dear new friend to be in the Catch Phrase contest you have to soup mail me for a Phrase...no one picked their phrases...this is a very good verse...yet it hasn't got a given phrase in it? You can ask on my poems comment section too...Light & Love
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Date: 6/11/2010 11:09:00 AM
This is really good and revealing. Love this poem. Very personal, thank you for sharing.
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