Journey

Captured beneath a smokey red hazy sky, mesmerized

My attention and heart did follow

Sky aglow for as far as the eye could see

A beautiful sunset resting in her hallow

 

Red, pinks, some bedazzled grays

Imprisoned rainbows from this day

Quiet as they did sweep, silent

Across the land into the deep

 

Breathless, I gazed upon such beauty magnificent

She gently kissed the earth goodnight

With my hand to my heart

I was lost without word, simply grateful for such a sight

 

Too quickly she hurried

Whispering sweet promises of her next journey

 

 

Written by : Corrina 
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015


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Date: 5/13/2015 7:27:00 AM
Corrina, lovely, captivating, magical, impressive 7 and thanks for visiting my poem, A perfec. . .
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Corrina Leblond
Date: 5/13/2015 9:21:00 AM
Thank you Broken Wings, I appreciate your time and comments as well , Many blessings Corrina
Date: 5/12/2015 2:39:00 PM
Corrina, you have so much to offer when it come to poetry. Thanks for sharing a journey in which is much more than path or just a part of life. We should enjoy every step we take, big small, happy, or sad.. For life is deep. Nature, how could we not enjoy.... SKAT
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Corrina Leblond
Date: 5/12/2015 10:10:00 PM
Thank you for your kind generous words SKAT, it means a lot to hear words from an established writer as yourself, hugz
Date: 5/12/2015 1:52:00 PM
Your poem is nice.ost without 'lost without word' is beautiful. Keep up the lovely imagedry.
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Corrina Leblond
Date: 5/12/2015 10:11:00 PM
Erin thank you for you words , images run rampant into minds eye , thank you for noticing. ! Best , corrina
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