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Journey

A single stride, like silence, from my mother's womb, Leads me through hills and valleys till I reach my tomb… Each step of my journey is an education; That, like a sculptor, shapes, sculpts my destination. Coiled in, like snow serpents, are cool freshwater streams; Wherefrom I quench my thirst; like rays, my journey gleams. Stern like a lion; steady; I complete each step; Sun and moon and stars enlighten my every pep. I don't curse the roads though, like crooked minds, damaged; I dig my routes; pave my paths; straighten the ravaged. So seldom have my paths been soft like flowers-paved; It's in ups and downs that I've always my zeal swayed. Fear, like thorns of a rose, is part of my journey; Loneliness, though thorny, my journey is ferny. Hope and trust, like torches, in my journey I bear; My successes and failures, like stories, I share. Of all journeys, the one going toward within; Has been the greatest of my self-fulfilling win… I know my journey will never come to an end; Till it finds its origin and end getting blend… 11 September 2021 ''J'' Contest, New or Old Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 9/15/2021 6:52:00 AM
Christuraj, congratulations on your win in my "I" contest with this wonderful poem, well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/16/2021 11:49:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 9/12/2021 9:58:00 PM
This is such a beautiful write... So many inspiring lines and imagery you have penned throughout your wonderful journey...
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/13/2021 8:21:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 9/12/2021 2:01:00 PM
I love the messages of your poem, except for serpents. I don't like them... LOL... they give me the chills.... Congratulations.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/13/2021 8:21:00 PM
Thank you very much.
Date: 9/11/2021 4:45:00 PM
You were well inspired by the J word journey, Chris. I like that line a lot: I know my journey will never come to an end; (I feel our journeys go on for an eternity!)
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/12/2021 4:42:00 AM
Thank you very much.
Date: 9/11/2021 7:55:00 AM
WoW! Christuraj, This is an excellent entry for the contest challenge. I agree life is the most significant journey of all. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekends:-) Alexis
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/11/2021 9:34:00 AM
Thank you very muich.
Date: 9/11/2021 7:20:00 AM
Love your expressions about the biggest journey of all - life. Very beautifully written.
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Christuraj Alex
Date: 9/11/2021 7:29:00 AM
Thank you very much.

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