Journey

A single stride, like silence, from my mother's womb,
Leads me through hills and valleys till I reach my tomb…

Each step of my journey is an education;
That, like a sculptor, shapes, sculpts my destination.

Coiled in, like snow serpents, are cool freshwater streams;
Wherefrom I quench my thirst; like rays, my journey gleams.

Stern like a lion; steady; I complete each step;
Sun and moon and stars enlighten my every pep.

I don't curse the roads though, like crooked minds, damaged;
I dig my routes; pave my paths; straighten the ravaged.

So seldom have my paths been soft like flowers-paved;
It's in ups and downs that I've always my zeal swayed.

Fear, like thorns of a rose, is part of my journey;
Loneliness, though thorny, my journey is ferny.

Hope and trust, like torches, in my journey I bear;
My successes and failures, like stories, I share.

Of all journeys, the one going toward within;
Has been the greatest of my self-fulfilling win…

I know my journey will never come to an end;
Till it finds its origin and end getting blend…




11 September 2021
''J'' Contest, New or Old Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Constance La France
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La France Avatar
September 15, 2021 at 6:52 AM
Christuraj, congratulations on your win in my "I" contest with this wonderful poem, well done ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
Alex Avatar
September 16, 2021 at 11:49 PM
Thank you very much.
Kannan Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 9:58 PM
This is such a beautiful write... So many inspiring lines and imagery you have penned throughout your wonderful journey...
Alex Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 8:21 PM
Thank you very much.
Evans Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 2:01 PM
I love the messages of your poem, except for serpents. I don't like them... LOL... they give me the chills.... Congratulations.
Alex Avatar
September 13, 2021 at 8:21 PM
Thank you very much.
Dietrich Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 4:45 PM
You were well inspired by the J word journey, Chris. I like that line a lot: I know my journey will never come to an end; (I feel our journeys go on for an eternity!)
Alex Avatar
September 12, 2021 at 4:42 AM
Thank you very much.
Y. Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 7:55 AM
WoW! Christuraj, This is an excellent entry for the contest challenge. I agree life is the most significant journey of all. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day and weekends:-) Alexis
Alex Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 9:34 AM
Thank you very muich.
Scragg Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 7:20 AM
Love your expressions about the biggest journey of all - life. Very beautifully written.
Alex Avatar
September 11, 2021 at 7:29 AM
Thank you very much.
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