Jonquils Droop

jonquil's blossoms droop seen through tiny willow leaves... cold cloudy morning
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Beaufort Avatar
February 17, 2013 at 4:42 PM
Remarkably, it is almost time for this. It comes in a month or two where I live. Thanks for looking forward until then. It takes something special.
Horsman Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 4:18 PM
lovely Sara, so visual
Gildersleeve Avatar
February 16, 2013 at 10:55 AM
Very nice Hauki Sara. It's amazing in just a few words so much is said. Warm Smiles, Connie
Dietrich Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 11:48 PM
You are back in top form with THIS awesome haiku!!!
Horne Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 12:54 PM
lovely haiku, my friend. Glad you goty a chuckle with the vampire poem - it was kind of tongue-in-cheek
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February 14, 2013 at 12:20 PM
Beautiful, Sara (as usual)! Terry
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February 14, 2013 at 8:23 AM
This is another very beautiful poem again which I enjoyed reading tonight my dear Sara. Thank you so much for sharing. I'm stopping by also to greet you and your love ones a great and happy Valentines Day! Wish you all the best of love this Heart's Day and always! take care! love and hugs, Leonora
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February 14, 2013 at 8:20 AM
I love how you describe the world around you my friend! You bring this world to life by your awesome words! You are very talented this way, I felt like I was there looking at your Jonquil's blossoms on a cloudy morning! This is such a lovely poem, I enjoyed reading this piece this morning, What a peaceful poem, Great Work!!
Squyres Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 7:49 AM
Lovely haiku !!
Manassian Avatar
February 14, 2013 at 7:42 AM
How you love nature! :) It is His handiwork...The heavens declare....and so does my friend, Sara. God bless. I don't know the Jonquil...must look it up! :) Thanks for sharing! Hugs!
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