Notes About The Poem

Written, November 8, 2024
For The Contest, “Jolted By Twilight”
Sponsor, Dilly Dally

Jolted By Twilight

I'm jolted by the twilight of my years.
So blessed to be mid-eighty standing still
to bask in memories of what has passed-
and grateful for my present, awesome life.

My thoughts of future years are now defined;
for certain, there's an ending to my road
where I will not be privy to the gifts
of taking part in good times that will come.

Four Great-Grand babies and one more to come;
their ages now, between newborn and five.
My thoughts of future joys with them decline
by that uncertain span, my future holds.

How many of their birthdays will I share?
How many holidays will I be there
with family to interact with them?
These questions show my limitations well.

I'm jolted by the twilight of my years.
But I must grasp my life as nearly full;
more empty if they never graced my world-
enjoying them until that gate is closed.
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Meadows Avatar
November 13, 2024 at 12:07 AM
It sounds like you have some lovely memories. Wishing you many more. A lovely poem.
Haight Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 11:17 AM
Thank you, Daisy, for your lovely comments! Sandra
Tor Avatar
November 8, 2024 at 5:41 PM
This was a heartfelt write Sandra. You have lived a wonderful life and the Good Lord will bless you with more of it. He tells not to worry about tomorrow because tomorrow has its own problems. A great entry for the Contest wishing you well...
Haight Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 11:16 AM
Thank you, Michael, for your visit and uplifting comments! I appreciate them so much. Sandra
Gayagay Avatar
November 8, 2024 at 3:54 PM
Beautiful musings. I have long been thinking of composing a poem with the persona being a grandmother, sitting on the porch of her home, looking into the distance at twilight, and having perhaps the most beautiful reverie in her life. I haven't gotten around to writing it yet, but your poem might just be an inspiration. Take care.
Haight Avatar
November 14, 2024 at 11:20 AM
Thank you for your visit and nice comment. Nice theme for your poem, and best wishes! I am happy that mine offered some inspiration! Sandra
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