Jolted By Twilight

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Written, November 8, 2024
For The Contest, “Jolted By Twilight”
Sponsor, Dilly Dally

I'm jolted by the twilight of my years.
So blessed to be mid-eighty standing still
to bask in memories of what has passed-
and grateful for my present, awesome life.

My thoughts of future years are now defined;
for certain, there's an ending to my road
where I will not be privy to the gifts
of taking part in good times that will come.

Four Great-Grand babies and one more to come;
their ages now, between newborn and five.
My thoughts of future joys with them decline
by that uncertain span, my future holds.

How many of their birthdays will I share?
How many holidays will I be there
with family to interact with them?
These questions show my limitations well.

I'm jolted by the twilight of my years.
But I must grasp my life as nearly full;
more empty if they never graced my world-
enjoying them until that gate is closed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024



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Date: 11/13/2024 12:07:00 AM
It sounds like you have some lovely memories. Wishing you many more. A lovely poem.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/14/2024 11:17:00 AM
Thank you, Daisy, for your lovely comments! Sandra
Date: 11/8/2024 5:41:00 PM
This was a heartfelt write Sandra. You have lived a wonderful life and the Good Lord will bless you with more of it. He tells not to worry about tomorrow because tomorrow has its own problems. A great entry for the Contest wishing you well...
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/14/2024 11:16:00 AM
Thank you, Michael, for your visit and uplifting comments! I appreciate them so much. Sandra
Date: 11/8/2024 3:54:00 PM
Beautiful musings. I have long been thinking of composing a poem with the persona being a grandmother, sitting on the porch of her home, looking into the distance at twilight, and having perhaps the most beautiful reverie in her life. I haven't gotten around to writing it yet, but your poem might just be an inspiration. Take care.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/14/2024 11:20:00 AM
Thank you for your visit and nice comment. Nice theme for your poem, and best wishes! I am happy that mine offered some inspiration! Sandra
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