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Jill Nursery Rhyme poetry Contest 

Sponsored by: Charles Messina

3rd place

Jill just can’t sit for one minute still; In everything she wants some thrill! One rainy evening she climbs a hill; From there she slips making a shrill! This results her fall straight into a rill; She swallows water a gallon at her will! As her belly swells, she falls critically ill; The quack there tries on her every pill! It costs them their farm to pay his bill!!

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Date: 11/22/2024 11:31:00 AM
Good one! Congrats on the win
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Srinivas Veepuri
Date: 11/24/2024 8:28:00 AM
Thanks! I'm so glad you liked it!
Date: 11/18/2024 2:30:00 AM
Well done with this sad tale, Srinivas. Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest. Thanks for entering...Charlie
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Srinivas Veepuri
Date: 11/18/2024 6:04:00 AM
Thank you very much, Charlie! I'm deeply honored to have my work recognized in your contest.
Date: 10/30/2024 5:40:00 AM
This is so amusing and equally sad. The resonance created by your mono rhyme is so pleasing. All the Best in the contest, dear friend.
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Srinivas Veepuri
Date: 10/30/2024 10:35:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa.

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