Jollof Rice

Jollof rice is honey comb,
Green pea and  sweet corn ,
Eye appealing, wife of tongue;
Its roasted drumstick:
Lord of every plate;
Jolly rice,
Taste!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meier-Hans Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 2:51 PM
Dropping back with my congratulations Kayod5
Kendrick Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 10:55 AM
Way to go !! Congrats ..Enjoyed reading it and wondering how that wife of tongue tasted?..Sara..Thanks for the visit..
Kayode Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 11:15 AM
Thank you Sara,nice that you are here...huggs
Callus Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 6:53 AM
Back again Koyod5....congrats on your fine win; I still intend to try out your interesting dish! // paul
Kayode Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 11:16 AM
Thank you Paul for the visit and the message...huggs
Allison Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 4:11 AM
Dropping back with my congrats Kayod5:-) hugs Jan xx
Kayode Avatar
November 15, 2014 at 11:17 AM
Thank you Jan for your visit and the message.
Dietrich Avatar
November 14, 2014 at 11:46 PM
Congrats for your win in my contest, Kayod. I did not understand the part about wife of tongue. Otherwise, I think it sounds kind of good to eat!!
Callus Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 6:40 AM
Hi Kayod5...I have looked up 'Jollof Rice' and it is one dish that I would willingly eat with gusto, especially since hot pepper can also be added to it. Your poem is also appetizing and tasteful to read. // (says it is common in Nigeria and West Africa) // paul
Kayode Avatar
November 8, 2014 at 10:44 AM
Thanks for this visit Paul,it is nice to have you here.
Kendrick Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 12:46 PM
Reads like a winner..Enjoyed reading this one today..Rice is good..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
Yvonne Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 10:44 AM
One of my favorite so far of this challenge. You cooked the meal but made a poem of it. In my opinion that is the ultimate challenge of this form.
Kayode Avatar
November 3, 2014 at 11:59 AM
Thank you for the visit Maurice, how I wish I could serve you jollfrice; that I think would be nice.
Helppi Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 7:59 PM
I have a good imagination, but it can't assemble this meal, the wife of tongue has me stumped.
Kayode Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 8:25 PM
Thank you Dan,nice to hear from you.
Meier-Hans Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 7:11 PM
Yes this does sound very appealing.
Kayode Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 8:24 PM
Thank you Brenda,nice to hear from you.
Allison Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 5:34 PM
Well I have to admit I'd never heard of 'jollof' but now I jolly well know what it is thanks to google - sounds delicious - great write - good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan xx
Allison Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 5:45 PM
We all speak the language of poetry and through that we can communicate and learn about eachother and ourselves and get new friends all over the world - this is the most wonderful thing I have found since I began writing in February:-) hugs Jan xx
Kayode Avatar
November 1, 2014 at 5:42 PM
Thank you Jan,though tribes and tongues made us differ, in PS we are one.
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