Sara Kendrick Poet Haiku

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Pink Tulips

 

Johnny Jump-Up or Viola 

Johnny Jump Up

provocatively
johnny jump up danced with wind...
pink tulips blushed red

spring rain wet them all
birds hidden away through fog...
crows' watchmen silent      



johnny jump up common name for viola.
Contest: Spring flower, Bird, Butterfly Haiku X2
Sponsor: Tania Kitchens
Date: February 16, 2023
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Frances Schiavina March 10, 2023 at 2:03 PM That's a brilliant poem sparkling hidden meaning. Congratulations Sara and thank you for honoring me by reading my poetry. Sara Kendrick March 10, 2023 at 2:59 PM Why, thank you, Frances. I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations and such a kind review of my work. Sara

Evelyn Judy Buehler February 27, 2023 at 10:58 AM I love the poem's stillness and movement, and its color and weather. This is a fave. :) Sara Kendrick February 27, 2023 at 12:28 PM Thank you, Evelyn. I appreciate the kind review of my work. Sara

Anne-Lise Andresen February 25, 2023 at 12:25 PM - Never heard of "johnny jump up" ... a lovely haiku poem, Sara :) - Congratulations on a 2nd place in the contest :) - hugs Sara Kendrick February 25, 2023 at 12:35 PM Thank you, Anne-Lise for dropping by with congratulations. I appreciate you doing so. Sara

Sam Kauffman February 25, 2023 at 10:04 AM Love this flower Sara with its mischievous name - a real sign of spring! Congratulations! Prayers and blessings to you! Sara Kendrick February 25, 2023 at 12:04 PM Why thank you, Sam. I am delighted that you stopped by and read my work. Sara

Paula Goldsmith February 25, 2023 at 8:11 AM Back with Congratulations on your win. A beautiful write/picture. Have a great/blessed weekend writing away......................... Sara Kendrick February 25, 2023 at 11:57 AM I appreciate you dropping by with congratulations and blessings. Your visits always encourage. Sara

Linda Alice Fowler February 25, 2023 at 7:48 AM Ah, l like this one Sara! Congratulations on your win! :) Sara Kendrick February 25, 2023 at 7:57 AM Thank you, Linda. I appreciate you dropping by with congrats

Heidi Sands February 25, 2023 at 4:36 AM Congratulations for your win :) Sara Kendrick February 25, 2023 at 6:45 AM Thank you, Heidi. I appreciate you dropping by to say congratulations. Sara

Tania Kitchin February 25, 2023 at 3:42 AM Sara, a sweet set of Spring haiku's, love the movement in this one, congratulations on your winning placement! Sara Kendrick February 25, 2023 at 6:43 AM Thank you, Tania. I appreciate you dropping by and letting me know I placed. Glad that you liked my work. Sara

Victor Buhagiar February 17, 2023 at 2:16 AM Lovely haikus. We always learn new words. Sara Kendrick February 17, 2023 at 3:44 AM Victor, Glad that we are always learning and not getting stale. If we don't go forward, we will start backing up. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Fin Chuuk February 16, 2023 at 8:28 PM Simply beautiful. :) Sara Kendrick February 17, 2023 at 3:40 AM Thank you, Chuuk. I appreciate the review. Sara

Paula Goldsmith February 16, 2023 at 11:35 AM I enjoyed this fun write. Have a blessed day writing away................. Sara Kendrick February 16, 2023 at 1:41 PM Paula, a day for grandson and great granddaughter so not fun in the way of writing a poem. LOL..Thanks for the blessing. Sara

Sotto Poet February 16, 2023 at 10:40 AM I admire your work in these gorgeous haikus in a variety of thoughts that you expressed. Best wishes for a win, Sara Sara Kendrick February 16, 2023 at 1:40 PM Why thank you, Lasaad. I appreciate you dropping by and taking time to read and comment. Sara

Supraja Kannan February 16, 2023 at 5:05 AM Wow!!! Such a joy to read this... Sara Kendrick February 16, 2023 at 5:10 AM Thank you, Supraja. I appreciate you stopping by and taking time to comment. Sara