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Poetry/Rhyme/John, The Baptist
Copyright Protected, ID 06-1558-068-27
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Chosen Theme, #10 John, the Bapist

Written June 27, 2023
For the International Standard contest, 12 Lines of Rhyme
sponsor, Joanna Daniel, Judged 07/02/2023

Second Place

John, the Baptist

 
John, the Baptist- baptised people in the Jordan River, Jesus said, the holy spirit came to him as a dove; to think about John, the preacher, the saint makes me quiver, imagine God giving this man the power of his love. John was a preacher in the Jordan River area, he was a prophet of God for all faiths- showing the way; come on Saturday, Sunday or any day feria, even unbelievers saw his baptism's as a gateway. Sadly, John was sentenced to death by King Herod, the Great, and he was beheaded, oh such fear of a preaching man; John's birth and death honored by Christians for his life and fate ... I pray to go the Jordan River where it all began.
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Merryman Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 9:07 PM
A lovely portrayal of John the Baptist, Constance! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
La France Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 2:28 PM
Kim, thank you so much for the compliment and congrats, God Bless !
Goldsmith Avatar
July 4, 2023 at 9:37 AM
Congratulations on your win. Your "John the Baptist" is a  lovely write/story. Love your line, "to think about John, the preacher, the saint makes me quiver," Have a blessed day.................
La France Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 2:29 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations and the compliment, God Bless !
Alex Avatar
July 3, 2023 at 1:01 AM
A great description of the hard work and forerunning aspects of John the Baptist. Beautifully written. Congratulations!
La France Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 2:30 PM
Christuraj, thank you so much for the compliment, comment and congratulations, God Bless !
Daniel Avatar
July 2, 2023 at 11:54 PM
Great poem on John, the Baptist, with your feelings summed up in the last line, Constance, congratulations:)
La France Avatar
July 6, 2023 at 2:30 PM
Jo, thank you so much for the comment, compliment and congratulations, God Bless !
Maverick Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 4:07 PM
A valuble write here Constance, I was imparted Quite a lot about John facts that are so powerful. I Gained a greater awareness of how God really Loves all humanity, and the great lengtHs He Goes to to get a rapport with us.'God bless.'
La France Avatar
June 30, 2023 at 7:03 AM
Joe, thank you so much for the compliment and nice comment on my poem, God Bless !
McBride  Avatar
June 27, 2023 at 3:50 PM
Beautiful poem of tribute, love it : )
La France Avatar
June 29, 2023 at 10:57 AM
Stephan, thank you so much for the compliment, God Bless !
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