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Dedicated to my brother

John, My Brother

From his anger,
To his humor,
No friends,
Thats just a rumor,

He's a great brother,
Even when he's annoying,
I know he's just joking,
I know he's just toying,

He's younger than me,
But only by a year,
Headfirst into everything,
As if there is nothing to fear,

He doesn't like school very much,
But he got sports captain, very proud,
I think he gets it from me,
Being very loud,

I love my dear brother very much,
Next year he's going to high school though,
Same school as me,
He will be a pro.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Jones Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 10:35 PM
Aw this is so sweet!
Bird Avatar
October 21, 2023 at 10:37 PM
Thank you, he is an amazing brother!! - Phoenix :)
M  Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 2:59 PM
Hey Phoenix….a lovely honest poem about your brother who you obviously love heaps! Now he can write a poem about you hehe! Great poem!! Debx
Bird Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 5:45 PM
Hi Deb, I will make him an account when he starts high school! - Phoenix :)
Poet Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 8:24 AM
A stunning display of unwavering devotion to the cherished soulmate, filled with captivating words that transport the reader to a world of enchanting poetic expression. Thanks for your kind comment on my page
Bird Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 12:57 PM
Thank you for the comment, he is a very lovely brother, and I really enjoyed your poem! - Phoenix :)
Bahr Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 4:18 AM
An interesting year ahead....hmmm ;)
Bird Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 12:56 PM
He will have an interesting year ahead! - Phoenix :)
Bangalee Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 3:18 AM
beautiful dedication to the beloved one; nice to read the poetic expression
Bird Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 12:55 PM
Hi! Thanks for the comment! - Phoenix :)
Daniel Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 3:03 AM
Really sweet, FB, your brother would be proud of this one:)
Bird Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 12:55 PM
I hope he is! - Phoenix :)
Buhagiar Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 1:44 AM
Unless he can become a professional in sports, he'd better start studying :) Blessings
Bird Avatar
October 16, 2023 at 1:46 AM
Hahaha, I will definitely tell him to! Thanks! - Phoenix :)
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