John, My Brother

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Dedicated to my brother

From his anger, To his humor, No friends, Thats just a rumor, He's a great brother, Even when he's annoying, I know he's just joking, I know he's just toying, He's younger than me, But only by a year, Headfirst into everything, As if there is nothing to fear, He doesn't like school very much, But he got sports captain, very proud, I think he gets it from me, Being very loud, I love my dear brother very much, Next year he's going to high school though, Same school as me, He will be a pro.

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Karen Jones

Date: 10/21/2023 10:35:00 PM

Aw this is so sweet!

Fire Bird
Date: 10/21/2023 10:37:00 PM

Thank you, he is an amazing brother!! - Phoenix :)

Deb M

Date: 10/16/2023 2:59:00 PM

Hey Phoenix….a lovely honest poem about your brother who you obviously love heaps! Now he can write a poem about you hehe! Great poem!! Debx

Fire Bird
Date: 10/16/2023 5:45:00 PM

Hi Deb, I will make him an account when he starts high school! - Phoenix :)

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/16/2023 8:24:00 AM

A stunning display of unwavering devotion to the cherished soulmate, filled with captivating words that transport the reader to a world of enchanting poetic expression. Thanks for your kind comment on my page

Fire Bird
Date: 10/16/2023 12:57:00 PM

Thank you for the comment, he is a very lovely brother, and I really enjoyed your poem! - Phoenix :)