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John Deere

john deere toy tractor wet with spring's low cloud's moisture.... silence pierces air
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Peranteau Avatar
March 29, 2015 at 9:40 AM
Wow, this was a great terse write Sara ! I was looking to read one of your writes today and notice the title of this write and was excited when I read it ! I'm a John Dear devotie ! TY...Have a blessed week dear poet. Much love, james
Kiser Avatar
March 24, 2015 at 9:42 AM
Oh I love this...my great nephew loves everything..."John Deere". A wonderful Senryu.
La France Avatar
March 23, 2015 at 8:54 AM
Sara, such beauty in a few words, 7 rating, and thanks for visiting my poetry . . .
Dietrich Avatar
March 22, 2015 at 11:26 PM
that last line is sure cool. silence piercing the air!!
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