Joe Who?

The ball was loose and bouncing
Joe dove towards it, just missing
The clock ticking down
Just then, Joe had found
His football skills were lacking

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/24/2012 9:42:00 AM

just in the nick of time ... maybe he was lacking due to excessive homework lol, ... much enjoyed.. anytime you need help i am here miss you too:) it's always nice to hear from you...p.d.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/22/2010 12:10:00 AM

oh man-- great timing to find out about those lack of football skills, eh? another cool limerick of yours, Mitch :) -- nikko :)

Skat A

Date: 10/14/2010 5:57:00 PM

lol, Mitch! Joe who? ~ENJOYED YOUR POEM~ Here I find myself all over the soup again. Stopping by to read many poems, before my crazy KIDS make me log out. I had a really nice time reading and catching up with you poets. Have a wonderful night*luv~SKAT"

Sidney Hall Mad Poet

Date: 10/14/2010 1:00:00 AM

Congratz in you win my friend. I love your limericks

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/13/2010 8:53:00 PM

I quite like this one, Mitch.Congrats on your HM. Luv, Andrea

Tahera Mannan

Date: 10/12/2010 10:09:00 PM

Many congratulations on your win Mitch. Thanks for the comments.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/12/2010 11:11:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Mitch in Linda-Marie's contest "Let's Limerick". Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 10/12/2010 7:58:00 AM

Mitch Congratulations on your worthy poem's success. Agape, Moses

Dr Hitendra Mehta

Date: 10/12/2010 5:03:00 AM

congrats on HM..... Luv/best wishes ... Hitendra Mehta

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/12/2010 3:23:00 AM

Congratulations on this fine win in the contest, Mitch

Francine Roberts

Date: 10/11/2010 11:32:00 PM

congrats on your HM in the contest with this great entry

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/11/2010 9:13:00 PM

Congrats Mitch on your HM in my Limerick contest .. appreciate your continued support with luv..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/7/2010 8:04:00 PM

Hi Mitch.. thankxxx for supporting my current contest luv...but... only five lines allowed for the competition.. so please removed one set of five .. thankxxx luv... hope all is well with u....

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/7/2010 9:46:00 AM

Thank you for sharing your excellent poetry with us Mitch. May your days always be filled with inspiration. Best to you in the contest. Love, Carol