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Joe Carl O'Neil

Your hand fell from my back Heard you let out a sigh I placed my hand on your face said 'care enough to say goodbye' I need you to walk away now leave my heart with me I cant hear the beat now that hurt is scaring me I cant need you like that no one can take that place you have your life of content my dreams you cant face Im the best in all of it thats what you continue to say my smile you will forget cant play the game your way even the greatist have broken pieces and even I cry at night the blue eyes that close to this are pleading to see the light my smile I have been faking my veins bleed like all stop saying Im too good for the taking then watch as I fall

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 2/14/2011 5:06:00 PM
its written about me, and the pain i suffered at the hands of these 2 men
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Date: 2/14/2011 12:22:00 PM
these two guys are too close together. i feel sorry for both of them. jhl
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Date: 11/25/2010 9:38:00 PM
I loved the flow of the words. Watch out for the typos. Other then that very touching piece
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