Jocelyn and Laken

Angels whispering,
their wings softly rustle.
Sweet girls asleep,
oh, love for the innocent.
Jocelyn and Laken,
the people bring
ivory roses dewy from
God’s tears.

6th grade7th gradeangelfree verse

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Sara Kendrick

February 6, 2026 at 6:59 AM

So sad about their deaths which were premature and so horrible. Sara K

Regina Elliott

February 6, 2026 at 1:16 PM

Hi Sara, such tragic endings to young lives. I grieve them. Thank you so much for coming by my poetry page. Many blessings to you. ~

Gershon Wolf

February 4, 2026 at 7:54 PM

Thanks for 'speaking up,' Regina. The silence from mainstream America and its media is deafening. Saving their voices to defend mostly indefensible illegal aliens, no doubt... What a country. ~ Gershon

Regina Elliott

February 5, 2026 at 3:42 AM

Hi Gershon, thank you. My heart is broken for Jocelyn, Laken, and other angel victims. I will not forget. Thank you for caring too. Shalom u’vrakha. ~