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Job the Phoenix

The 
yearnings 
and 
groanings 
of 
afflicted 
Job,
Echoing 
in 
the 
silence 
of 
boredom 
and 
loneliness,
A 
melancholic 
and 
sober 
music,
Giving 
sweet 
and 
beautiful 
tone,
Only 
to 
the 
ears 
of 
his 
listeners.

A 
reminiscence 
he 
thought,
Perhaps 
will 
relieve 
his 
pains.
Used 
to 
be 
the 
best
For 
once 
upon 
a 
time,
Once 
a 
valued 
gold
But 
now 
a 
cast 
out 
stone.
The 
only 
thing 
left 
to 
brag
Now 
but 
left 
in 
the 
past.

Lamenting 
at 
the 
corner 
of  
confusion,
Crying 
foul 
on 
matters 
of 
his 
affliction,
Asking 
the 
same 
puzzling 
questions,
Over 
and 
over 
again,
Though 
rhetorical 
but 
expecting 
answers,
Why 
do 
the 
righteous 
suffer? 

Then 
out 
came 
the 
thundering 
voice,
Able 
to 
scare 
the 
bravest,
But 
comfort 
to 
Job 
the 
weakest.
The 
consoling 
words 
of 
supreme 
God 
of 
Job,
Puting 
an 
end 
to 
all 
his 
woes.

There 
is 
hope 
for 
a 
seed,
Though 
it 
be 
dead 
in 
the 
soil,
But 
out 
of 
mysteries 
will 
sprout 
out,
Blooming 
proudly 
with 
new 
kinds
In 
thousands, 
millions 
and 
billions,
Just 
like 
a 
phoenix 
rebirth 
out 
of 
its 
doom. 

Plot: 
The 
poem 
is 
based 
on 
the 
biblical 
character 
of 
Job 
whose 
fortune 
was 
restored 
after 
he 
has 
lost 
everything 
including 
family 
out 
of 
the 
verge 
of 
complete 
hopelessness.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 4/10/2014 7:32:00 AM
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Johnson Adeniyi
Date: 4/10/2014 7:48:00 AM
THANKS
Date: 4/4/2014 5:19:00 PM
Johnson, awesome free verse poem... , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join, March 2010. You'll find many friendly poets, who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I want to be the first to invite you on over, to the contest page. I OFFER MY CONTEST, in hopes it inspires you to write another poem. I'm looking forward to following you and your poetry ha-ha a special pair:) here's the link to the contest page. http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_contests/ <---~Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 4/4/2014 12:02:00 PM
Hi Johnson, , Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will find much delight, in reading and in time become familiar with your poetry. At this very moment, I will greet you with the same smile, other poets passed when I first join the soup 4 years ago. I wish you the best when it comes to your writings. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Johnson Adeniyi
Date: 4/10/2014 8:12:00 AM
hey, thanks for the cool welcoming gesture. Am a Yoruba Nigerian guy who has just discovered passion for poetry and is aspiring to becoming better and better in the art through inspirations from poems of great poets like yourself. I've gone through some of your poems, and menn.., they are great. Looking forward to learning some of those skills from you.
Date: 4/4/2014 7:32:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Johnson :) - I choose your first long :)) and nice written poem - Nice to meet you :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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