Job Done

JOB  DONE   
        

In autumn, our love for this farm began, years ago.  
We pulled it out of the ground, and kept steady
And watched the kids and corn and apples grow -
Watched them ripen and become ready.

Such love overflowed our hearts with passion.
Now comfortable, mellow, fruitful, it yields
Cosy warmth as we watch the profusion
Of a job well done from satisfying fields.

Everywhere there is ripeness to the core:
Warm pies with swelled, plump apples from each bough  
Now loaded with golden, yellow blessings, turning more
And more into a falling sunset of leaves covering  the plough. 

Gathering birds listen in the fruit-filled orchards steeped 
In the whispers of the winnowing wind’s crisp air  - passed
Quietly over  the  corn stubble full-reaped  -
That the time to fly is approaching at last.

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Meier-Hans Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 7:48 AM
I loved reading this beautiful Autumn poem Sidney. It reminded me of when I lived on a farm and brought back beautiful memories. I could smell the pie and harvest. Congratulations on your win.
Mehta Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 5:18 AM
Enjoyed lovely imagery, congrats, Sidney
Andresen Avatar
September 17, 2014 at 3:57 AM
- Congrats with your win,Sidney !!!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Deschler Avatar
September 16, 2014 at 9:09 PM
Yes, everything must eventually grow and change.... This is a nice description of autumn in a country setting. A very charming write, Sidney! Congrats on your win!
Andresen Avatar
August 15, 2012 at 7:00 AM
Beautiful for the contest Sidney !!! - Wish you luck and hope for a win for you. - Have a lovely day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Bauer Avatar
August 15, 2012 at 6:46 AM
beautiful imagery! good luck in the contest...
Williams Avatar
August 15, 2012 at 2:56 AM
Sidney snug warm visions, I like it, good luck..David
Beck Avatar
August 15, 2012 at 5:08 AM
many thanks for your comments...glad you like it....John Keats of course said just about everything possible about Autumn...its a hard act to follow....he's always been one of my favorites....thanks again ....best w Syd
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