Joaquin's Girls (Caught On Canvas)

This is a portrayal of one of my favorite paintings by 
Joaquin Sorolla y Bastida: Spanish painter 1863 - 1923. 
The title of his portait I am writing about is called
"Paseo a orilla del mar" or "Walk on the Beach"

Joaquin’s  Girls (Caught on Canvas)

Beside Valencia’s blue sea,
two graceful women walk along.
Their beauty and serenity
could be the lyrics to wind’s song.

Two graceful women walk along.
An artist’s fair and precious pearls
could be the lyrics to wind’s song:
his wife and daughter, Joaquin’s girls.

An artist’s fair and precious pearls,
one with parasol and one with hat in hand,
his wife and daughter, Joaquin’s girls,
in long white dresses, walk the sand.

One with parasol and one with hat in hand,
both, caught on canvas with an artist’s ease,
in long white dresses, walk the sand. 
Lace trailing them is billowed by the breeze.

Both caught on canvas with an artist’s ease:
their beauty and serenity!
Lace trailing them is billowed by the breeze
beside Valencia’s blue sea.

Andrea Dietrich/ Nov. 21, 2010
For Paula Swanson's Pantoum Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Mehta Avatar
December 14, 2010 at 12:26 AM
Many congrats Andrea on ranked 2nd in Paulas Pantoum contest with this beautiful write. Canvas seems to be talking live.... too gud. Luv/best wishes........Hitendra Mehta
Brown Avatar
December 13, 2010 at 11:20 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea in Paula's Pantoum contest. Love, Carol
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December 12, 2010 at 11:39 PM
Able to be seen through with clarity, congratulations, Andrea on your winning 2nd place for Paula's Pantoum contest. (^_^) Noel.
Mannan Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 7:59 PM
Your poem is a beautiful dedication to this wonderful painting. Many congratulations for this super win.
Radke Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 7:05 PM
Oh, beautifully done. I looked at the painting before I read the poem, after reading your introduction, so I could see what your eyes had seen as you wrote. This is a wonderful poem and is surely as lovely as the painting. Thank you for writing this and congratulations on being among the winners of the pantoum contest.
Kendrick Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 11:39 AM
Congratulations on your win in the contest..Sara
Haick Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 11:29 AM
Congratulations on your 2nd Place win in the contest, Andrea! Enjoy! SM! Love, Audrey
Funk Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 10:33 AM
Truly, there is talent here at PoetrySoup! Thank you for this painting in prose.
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December 12, 2010 at 8:23 AM
I was sure this terrific poem would place high, Andrea. Congratulations! Love, Carolyn
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December 12, 2010 at 7:16 AM
Congrats Andrea on your super big win in Paula's Pantoum contest with this wonderful write and win my friend.. enjoy another top ten victory with luv..
Guzzi Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 6:23 AM
Congrad's on your win, being able as you are to do the iambic meter SO well really adds to the enjoyment of this form! Light & Love
Mehta Avatar
December 12, 2010 at 5:43 AM
Congratulations on this second place win in the contest of Paula, Andrea
Guzzi Avatar
December 11, 2010 at 9:49 AM
That is a lovely picture! Good luck Andie! Light & Love
Harper Avatar
November 28, 2010 at 9:52 PM
You capture the picture well, good work:)
Devonshire Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 7:17 AM
Like Joaquin himself, you paint a very beautiful picture of these girls walking the beach in their white dresses. Haven't seen this painting, but feel as though I have after reading your words. Best wishes in Paula's contest, Andrea! Thanksgiving was hectic; didn't eat much but still had a sick tummy. Guess it was from the stress. Hope you had a great holiday and good for you for not succumbing to the urge to overeat. Love, Carolyn
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November 23, 2010 at 7:18 PM
It maks me wonder if I have seen this paintng,, Andrea, I sure did enjoyed this wonderful of yours,, By the way, I will send you e- mail by morning so look out for it. I will make sure this time i validate it,,p.d.
Austin Avatar
November 23, 2010 at 7:59 AM
An utterly feminine piece and so charming. What the hell I aint macho! Love, Dave
Haick Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 9:57 PM
A very beautiful, delightful poem, Andrea. One for the winners' list, definitely! Lovely! Love, audrey
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November 22, 2010 at 6:20 PM
The details of Canvas you have weaved in this lovely Poem gives a very clear picture of the beauty, which must have charmed its viewers. Your picturesque write is equally beautiful like the great artist who made the Painting 'Walk on the Beach'. My good wishes for your entry in the contest. Love and best wishes.........Ravindra........Andrea Dietrich.
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November 22, 2010 at 2:40 PM
Such a beautiful read Andrea,Thank you for all your help with my poem.Do you have a facebook cause I do of u want go see mine Teresa Skyles.Your friend Teresa
Anish Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 2:26 PM
What an intresting write. I once published an article about female impressionist painters in Barrs Postcard News. I just learned a little more about aart - which is all to the good! Love Matthew Anish
Neels Avatar
November 22, 2010 at 12:00 PM
I am wishing you the best with your entry Andrea.. You sure made me curious about this painting as well... Love Wilma
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November 22, 2010 at 9:36 AM
love, sounds like a place n heaven, or someones heaven
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November 22, 2010 at 9:35 AM
many thanks for your wonderfull comments on a days grace, Andrea
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November 22, 2010 at 6:31 AM
Andrea, this is a mavelous pantoum write, your words truly brought the painting to life, excellent imagery, tone and flow, it is indeed a pleasure to have read for you :-) Good Luck with the contest it looks like a winner to me. Hugs and God's Love , Always, Adell
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