Jm

At the end of the day-
                                         the West begins its rage
locate your fishing clothes-
                                         we're going out dancing
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Kendrick Avatar
May 2, 2010 at 4:34 PM
Interesting write in this one..Sara
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May 2, 2010 at 4:13 PM
You have me smiling with this one. I love to dance. Best wishes in the contest. Keep on writing. Karen
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May 2, 2010 at 2:07 PM
good luck in the contest, nice monoku,..p.d.
Sweetheart Avatar
May 2, 2010 at 1:52 PM
Good luck in the contest John.. an interesting entry... with luv..from the "Sweetheart"
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