Sara Kendrick Poet I do not know?

Jiving Mouse

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                                     My mouse died
                                On him I totally relied
                                 How I cried and cried
                                 Replaced his battery  
                             Then he came back alive
                                Now we can really jive

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Wilma Neels November 19, 2010 at 12:20 PM Witty write Sara thanks for the smiles before bed ;)

Michael J. Falotico November 19, 2010 at 10:34 AM LOL, thanks for making me smile after a long week at work... you always do....Love Michael

Jancarl Campi November 18, 2010 at 2:17 PM Thank you for your comment on my haikus you read today. At first glance I thought that it was a pet mouse ( well it is possible) then as I went on it was a toy. A delightful read that made me laugh. Thanks for the laugh and thanks for your kind words. Take care and stay sweet, Jancarl

Kabuteng P.Ink K. November 18, 2010 at 2:03 PM well I sure am happy that mouse came back to life! Thank goodness for batteries! & I hope your ankle's all better by now, or at least good enough so you can walk around-- you take care Sara -- nikko :)

Joe Maverick November 18, 2010 at 11:33 AM totaly mad piece totaly enjoyed,Sarah

Nette Onclaud November 18, 2010 at 9:21 AM you did amaze me, sara.. clap, clap for a witty, rib-tickling piece... hopefully, we psoupers will come face-to face rather than mouse-to-mouse..:)) enjoyed this as much as your last comment on my space... warmest, nette

Fabiyas M V November 18, 2010 at 5:40 AM You really jive now? I think you can.Very nice write ,sara

Dr.Ram Mehta November 17, 2010 at 1:50 PM Batteries in human being are quite different it requires a lot of efforts to charge it. How nice for the toys, Sara

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen November 17, 2010 at 1:49 PM LOL Cute and funny!

Robb A. Kopp November 17, 2010 at 1:07 PM Cute mouse Many thanks to your kind comment to my poem. :) Robb

Carolyn Devonshire November 17, 2010 at 11:10 AM Such a cute poem, Sara. Wouldn't it be nice if all we needed were batteries to restore human life? Enjoyed! Love, Carolyn