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Jiving Mouse

. My mouse died On him I totally relied How I cried and cried Replaced his battery Then he came back alive Now we can really jive

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/19/2010 12:20:00 PM
Witty write Sara thanks for the smiles before bed ;)
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Date: 11/19/2010 10:34:00 AM
LOL, thanks for making me smile after a long week at work... you always do....Love Michael
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Date: 11/18/2010 2:17:00 PM
Thank you for your comment on my haikus you read today. At first glance I thought that it was a pet mouse ( well it is possible) then as I went on it was a toy. A delightful read that made me laugh. Thanks for the laugh and thanks for your kind words. Take care and stay sweet, Jancarl
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Date: 11/18/2010 2:03:00 PM
well I sure am happy that mouse came back to life! Thank goodness for batteries! & I hope your ankle's all better by now, or at least good enough so you can walk around-- you take care Sara -- nikko :)
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Date: 11/18/2010 11:33:00 AM
totaly mad piece totaly enjoyed,Sarah
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Date: 11/18/2010 9:21:00 AM
you did amaze me, sara.. clap, clap for a witty, rib-tickling piece... hopefully, we psoupers will come face-to face rather than mouse-to-mouse..:)) enjoyed this as much as your last comment on my space... warmest, nette
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Date: 11/18/2010 5:40:00 AM
You really jive now? I think you can.Very nice write ,sara
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Date: 11/17/2010 1:50:00 PM
Batteries in human being are quite different it requires a lot of efforts to charge it. How nice for the toys, Sara
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Date: 11/17/2010 1:49:00 PM
LOL Cute and funny!
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Date: 11/17/2010 1:07:00 PM
Cute mouse Many thanks to your kind comment to my poem. :) Robb
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Date: 11/17/2010 11:10:00 AM
Such a cute poem, Sara. Wouldn't it be nice if all we needed were batteries to restore human life? Enjoyed! Love, Carolyn
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