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Jiving Mouse

. My mouse died On him I totally relied How I cried and cried Replaced his battery Then he came back alive Now we can really jive

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Wilma Neels

Date: 11/19/2010 12:20:00 PM

Witty write Sara thanks for the smiles before bed ;)

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 11/19/2010 10:34:00 AM

LOL, thanks for making me smile after a long week at work... you always do....Love Michael

Jancarl Campi

Date: 11/18/2010 2:17:00 PM

Thank you for your comment on my haikus you read today. At first glance I thought that it was a pet mouse ( well it is possible) then as I went on it was a toy. A delightful read that made me laugh. Thanks for the laugh and thanks for your kind words. Take care and stay sweet, Jancarl

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/18/2010 2:03:00 PM

well I sure am happy that mouse came back to life! Thank goodness for batteries! & I hope your ankle's all better by now, or at least good enough so you can walk around-- you take care Sara -- nikko :)

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/18/2010 11:33:00 AM

totaly mad piece totaly enjoyed,Sarah

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/18/2010 9:21:00 AM

you did amaze me, sara.. clap, clap for a witty, rib-tickling piece... hopefully, we psoupers will come face-to face rather than mouse-to-mouse..:)) enjoyed this as much as your last comment on my space... warmest, nette