Jinxed

Jinxed kisses taste like copper lightning vows erupt mid-air, cursed by tainted lips never meant for forever.

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Ink Empress

Date: 5/8/2025 4:12:00 AM

Dear Billie; this is beyond touching and soul hitting how youv described and expressed from the perspective of an individual that has tasted jinxed love from tainted lips, and your arrangement of words here is impressive and so artistic! Thank you for sharing this deeply moving take. Congratulations on your top win! Sending you light!

Billie Jama
Date: 5/8/2025 7:35:00 AM

Awe thanks. I'm glad you enjoyed. That's what I like about word prompts. I would have never used the word jinxed and this poem would have never happened if it wasn't for the prompt. So thank you for your musings

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/8/2025 1:49:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great micro poem, Billie :) - hugs

Billie Jama
Date: 5/8/2025 7:31:00 AM

Thank you kindly : )

Lin Lane

Date: 4/29/2025 4:46:00 AM

Best stay clear of such lips. Angst made clear, Billie.

Billie Jama
Date: 4/29/2025 7:31:00 AM

Yes, indeed. I have and will continue to.