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Jinn Or Jacks

I remember it well that October night Meteors aligned tipped like candelabra lights I'm sitting in my outhouse under a hakka lantern Yea, in Guangxi Province, pending storm concerns Kinda spooky feeling magnetic electric zipping Need to lay of the 'Jacks' feels like I'm tripping It's like a potion to me, it brings me to likes edge Thankfully the 'Moor' in me, saves me from the ledge Wow, crash boom bang, thunder clap new, mun! Blimey, bloody broom noisy, just like my neighbour Erratic lightning laylines break open Eastern skies Suddenly a shadow in the corner, and I ff'ing swore! My legs aren't even moving but this misty fog lures I Bleary eyes focusing at, at, this Succubus, she On the Radio 'Wake me I am dreaming' by the 'Love Affair' Minds guising disguising, just what is 'Jacks' streaming I awake in the morn, wondering what went the night before Elves, Goblins, Fairies or could it be the Jinn Genie! Blimey if I was worth my weight in salt, I'd go to church But if I told this story when younger, I'd sure have got the birch.

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Date: 10/10/2022 7:48:00 PM
Had to look this up "Succubus" then burst out laughing. Nicely done!!
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Date: 10/10/2022 4:57:00 PM
Love this adventure of yours James truly enjoyed reading. Thanks for sharing...
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