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Jimmy

As Jimmy rode his broomstick pony I'm Roy Rogers he would yell With silver pistols at the ready He was the good guy you could tell No horse theif dared to face him As he galloped across the kitchen floor Roy Rogers is my hero Even if he's ony four

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Corinne Curcio

Date: 3/7/2009 5:33:00 PM

A charming poem. Delightful!

Ernilando Tugaff

Date: 3/7/2009 12:52:00 AM

This reminds of of my son when he was still a lad. Congrats on your featured poem. Keep on psoting/writing. Ernilando

Tyesha Ehigiator

Date: 3/4/2009 3:25:00 PM

Ah, too cute...Thank you for sharing this warm piece, it made me smile as I can picture this so clearly..Congratulations on having it featured this week and God Bless You ~Tyesha

Michael Jordan

Date: 3/4/2009 6:53:00 AM

Vernette this poem is just to cute and special - I can see Jimmy, 4 years old dressed in his cowboy suit going at full speed - Congratulations on being featured this week - God Bless, MJ

Celeste Butler-Mendez

Date: 3/4/2009 3:31:00 AM

I like the poem Vernette. It made me smile, but I am wondering who is four? Is it Jimmy or Roy because it would seem it is Roy. The sentence, if you're referring to Jimmy, should read "Roy Rogers is my hero, even though I'm only four." Also, you have thief spelled incorrectly.

Vince Suzadail Jr.

Date: 3/3/2009 1:17:00 PM

Those were the days. Gene Autry was mine. Each moment is so precious. Congratulations on "Jimmy" being featured. Vince

Trudy Diane Rider

Date: 3/3/2009 11:20:00 AM

Roy Rogers has just become my hero too! What a great poem! Congratulations on being featured!

Sue Mason

Date: 3/2/2009 2:25:00 PM

Very clever write here, Vernette and great imagery!! I can see your Jimmy now ... smile ... One little correction (please excuse the English teacher in me) ... the word thief has the ie backwards ... smile ... Great selection here at the Soup to be a feature this week. Congratulations!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/2/2009 12:33:00 PM

Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week Vernette. Love, Carol

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/2/2009 6:09:00 AM

Too precious! Warmest congrats Vernette on your featured write. Love, Shar

Date: 3/1/2009 5:42:00 PM

Thank you for allowing me to smile with this poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Cute piece. I wish you continued success with your writing. Karen