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Contest Winner Medal 2 Jillybean Michael Ramel

Jillybean

Y’all know her as Jill
I know her as Jillybean
Y’all familiar with the hill
But I know a different scene
She actually hales from Swan Hill
That’s close to Nantucket
I know her to have carried a will
Not the familiar bucket
So on the story goes 
But no tumbling or tumbling after
Just some good times
A lot memories and laughter
Can’t say for sure
I heard Jillybean got married
Well it wasn’t to me
Because I was harried and tarried
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Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 11:27 AM
Y'all from the south?
The Primordial Poet Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 6:47 PM
I did live in North Carolina for a year, and in Georgia for a year and a half......but I am a Yankee....not many know this, but the plural of y'all is all y'all
Dietrich Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 11:27 AM
I really like this. Congrats on your win.
The Primordial Poet Avatar
November 22, 2024 at 6:48 PM
Thanks Andrea
Messina Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 2:05 AM
I liked this short and witty write, Michael. Congratulations on your winning placement in my contest. Thanks for entering...Charlie
The Primordial Poet Avatar
November 18, 2024 at 4:31 PM
Thanks Charlie
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