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Written, October 30, 2024
For The Contest, “Jill Nursery Rhyme”
Sponsor, Charles Messina

Miss Jill was such a busy girl; loved jumping rope that she would twirl. One day her foot caught in the whirl and down she went with a quick swirl. But one, two three- she got up fast! Along came Jack, who quickly asked; “Since you're okay, let's try at last to gather water like the past!” “Oh no,” said Jill- “that hill's too steep; and now this rope just tripped my leap! Tomorrow- some new fun I'll reap and walk the meadow with the sheep!” And so, Jill had the greatest time; no rope to jump or hill to climb. The church bells played a lovely chime while she held tiny lambs- sublime!

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