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Jill's Better Batter Apple Pie

Jill’s Better Batter Apple Pie (Children Story) Jack loved apple pie Jill said, Oh my It is your birthday, I’ll Bake you a big apple pie. For a starter Jill used Eggs, milk, sugar and flour. It took her one hour She tried to mixed a Better batter , And in the oven it went. Jill told Jack to invite Some friends. Jack invited Humpty Dumpty. Willie Winkie, and Diddle Diddle Who brought his fiddle. Jill invited Sally and little Miss Muffet. She was dancing With Jack and Willie Winkie Who was sweating and Smelled stinky. Rub a dub the whole apple pie They gabbled up. Jack did wash all the dishes And Jill gave him three Birthday kisses. Erich J. Goller Copyright 8.10.2011

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Date: 4/9/2013 9:25:00 AM
Hi Erich, this sweet poem made me smile, I love apple pie.
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Erich Goller
Date: 4/9/2013 12:57:00 PM
thank you very much Sheri.I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.Hugs!Erich
Date: 11/2/2012 5:13:00 AM
I wish more folks got to read this darling kid's poem! Pure magic!uthn
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Date: 11/2/2012 12:30:00 PM
thank you very much Gwendolen, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.Hugs!Erich
Date: 10/3/2012 12:59:00 PM
So nice, did you write it for your grandchildren/children??. Well done. Lee
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Date: 10/3/2012 2:54:00 PM
thank you very much Lee, that was a long time ago. Hugs!Erich
Date: 9/12/2012 9:15:00 AM
you are so diverse Erich,, love this
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Date: 9/12/2012 10:30:00 AM
thank you very much Harry, for your inspiring words. Erich
Date: 9/12/2012 3:39:00 AM
Maybe I'll make myself an apple pie it sounds very good. Like it, sweet poems Erich. oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/12/2012 10:29:00 AM
thank you very much Anne Lise, I 'm glad you liked the poem, apple pie is my favorite,Hugs!Erich
Date: 9/11/2012 10:06:00 PM
ahhhh, this is sweet!!! a child would love it in a little picture book.
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Erich Goller
Date: 9/12/2012 10:27:00 AM
thank you very much Andrea,I' m glad you liked the poem.Hugs!Erich

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