Jill's Better Batter Apple Pie

Jill’s Better Batter Apple Pie (Children Story) Jack loved apple pie Jill said, Oh my It is your birthday, I’ll Bake you a big apple pie. For a starter Jill used Eggs, milk, sugar and flour. It took her one hour She tried to mixed a Better batter , And in the oven it went. Jill told Jack to invite Some friends. Jack invited Humpty Dumpty. Willie Winkie, and Diddle Diddle Who brought his fiddle. Jill invited Sally and little Miss Muffet. She was dancing With Jack and Willie Winkie Who was sweating and Smelled stinky. Rub a dub the whole apple pie They gabbled up. Jack did wash all the dishes And Jill gave him three Birthday kisses. Erich J. Goller Copyright 8.10.2011
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Harper Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 9:25 AM
Hi Erich, this sweet poem made me smile, I love apple pie.
Goller Avatar
April 9, 2013 at 12:57 PM
thank you very much Sheri.I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.Hugs!Erich
Song Avatar
November 2, 2012 at 5:13 AM
I wish more folks got to read this darling kid's poem! Pure magic!uthn
Goller Avatar
November 2, 2012 at 12:30 PM
thank you very much Gwendolen, I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.Hugs!Erich
Ramage Avatar
October 3, 2012 at 12:59 PM
So nice, did you write it for your grandchildren/children??. Well done. Lee
Goller Avatar
October 3, 2012 at 2:54 PM
thank you very much Lee, that was a long time ago. Hugs!Erich
Horsman Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 9:15 AM
you are so diverse Erich,, love this
Goller Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 10:30 AM
thank you very much Harry, for your inspiring words. Erich
Andresen Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 3:39 AM
Maybe I'll make myself an apple pie it sounds very good. Like it, sweet poems Erich. oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Goller Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 10:29 AM
thank you very much Anne Lise, I 'm glad you liked the poem, apple pie is my favorite,Hugs!Erich
Dietrich Avatar
September 11, 2012 at 10:06 PM
ahhhh, this is sweet!!! a child would love it in a little picture book.
Goller Avatar
September 12, 2012 at 10:27 AM
thank you very much Andrea,I' m glad you liked the poem.Hugs!Erich
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