Jigsaw

Got a house got a home
Got a bed got a phone
And I got me a shiny new car 
I got gas in the tank 
I got cash in the bank
But I don’t ever go very far
Got a giant TV
I got time, just for me
When I want I can have me a brew
I got all I require
But, at night, by the fire
The one thing I aint got is you
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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May 15, 2010 at 5:39 PM
ENJOYED THE WRITE, THE LAST TWO LINES HAD ME AT AWH LOL
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May 15, 2010 at 4:47 PM
Before I got to the last line, I was thinking this fella has it all. Sad that the one thing we want most sometimes proves elusive, John. Nice work on this "Jigsaw." Love, Carolyn
Budd Avatar
May 15, 2010 at 4:46 PM
At first I thought it was going to be silly but it's actually cute. Reminds me of a country song. Nice write.
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