Jigsaw

Got a house got a home Got a bed got a phone And I got me a shiny new car I got gas in the tank I got cash in the bank But I don’t ever go very far Got a giant TV I got time, just for me When I want I can have me a brew I got all I require But, at night, by the fire The one thing I aint got is you

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Skat A

Date: 5/15/2010 5:39:00 PM

ENJOYED THE WRITE, THE LAST TWO LINES HAD ME AT AWH LOL

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/15/2010 4:47:00 PM

Before I got to the last line, I was thinking this fella has it all. Sad that the one thing we want most sometimes proves elusive, John. Nice work on this "Jigsaw." Love, Carolyn

Destiny Budd

Date: 5/15/2010 4:46:00 PM

At first I thought it was going to be silly but it's actually cute. Reminds me of a country song. Nice write.