Jibing Sail Chaos

Main sail boom swings ‘cross,
Boat heeling wild, all duck! 
Waves wash, dryness past.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Meade Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 7:37 PM
Nice -- I know of this chaotic dance when wind and wave meet skin!! Nicely done my friend.
Wilson Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 8:20 PM
I'm grateful for the kind words! I wish you a fresh breeze, and poetry ease!
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