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Jibing Sail Chaos

Main sail boom swings ‘cross, Boat heeling wild, all duck! Waves wash, dryness past.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Date: 11/29/2014 7:37:00 PM
Nice -- I know of this chaotic dance when wind and wave meet skin!! Nicely done my friend.
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Chaim Wilson
Date: 11/29/2014 8:20:00 PM
I'm grateful for the kind words! I wish you a fresh breeze, and poetry ease!