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Jewish Rhythmic Elemental Summoning Dance Music

Fool an i we lay so incredulously In a love.... That it seems our sorrows rest in mind and all is enabled, now we able, to weave mesh of this light as we bind... seemingly caught up in webs of time. But stood it may like a shadow was the thoughts that attest between us.. how uncouth the prattled battle lay, all it consumes, as it presumes , to arrest and attest for our lives... keeping us caught up in lies 'till we die.

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Date: 3/2/2012 6:09:00 PM
Billy, hummm, makes me wonder if fool an I are the same person...great poem..~have a nice one ;-)* PD
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Billy Tunk
Date: 12/4/2015 5:34:00 PM
They can become one... But they are two while a claim can still be made...
Date: 3/2/2012 12:14:00 PM
Thank you for always sharing your excellent poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. I hope you have a great weekend filled with inspiration. I will be back the first of the week and hope to see more of your poetry posted here to read Billy. Love, Carol
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Billy Tunk
Date: 12/4/2015 5:35:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words. If you'd like take a look at my new poem, chest cavity. Blessings upon you.
Date: 3/2/2012 8:16:00 AM
Billy, creative and evocative. The title is intriguing? Jay
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Billy Tunk
Date: 12/4/2015 5:36:00 PM
Thank you. The title is pseudo-sexual
Date: 3/2/2012 5:41:00 AM
mmm...
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Date: 3/2/2012 2:33:00 AM
Well worked Billy. - Have a lovely day. - oxox Anne-Lise
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Billy Tunk
Date: 3/2/2012 2:39:00 AM
why..... thank you... I forgot others would read it.... ughh im embarrassed.

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