Jewish Rhythmic Elemental Summoning Dance Music

Fool an i
we lay so incredulously
In a love....
That it seems our sorrows rest in mind
and all is enabled,
now we able,
to weave mesh of this light as we bind...
seemingly caught up in webs of time.

But stood it may
like a shadow 
was the thoughts that attest between us..
how uncouth the prattled battle lay,
all it consumes,
as it presumes ,
to arrest and attest for our lives...
keeping us caught up in lies 'till we die.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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March 2, 2012 at 6:09 PM
Billy, hummm, makes me wonder if fool an I are the same person...great poem..~have a nice one ;-)* PD
Tunk Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 5:34 PM
They can become one... But they are two while a claim can still be made...
Brown Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 12:14 PM
Thank you for always sharing your excellent poetry with us here at PoetrySoup. I hope you have a great weekend filled with inspiration. I will be back the first of the week and hope to see more of your poetry posted here to read Billy. Love, Carol
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December 4, 2015 at 5:35 PM
Thank you for your kind words. If you'd like take a look at my new poem, chest cavity. Blessings upon you.
Herman Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 8:16 AM
Billy, creative and evocative. The title is intriguing? Jay
Tunk Avatar
December 4, 2015 at 5:36 PM
Thank you. The title is pseudo-sexual
Smith Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 5:41 AM
mmm...
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March 2, 2012 at 2:33 AM
Well worked Billy. - Have a lovely day. - oxox Anne-Lise
Tunk Avatar
March 2, 2012 at 2:39 AM
why..... thank you... I forgot others would read it.... ughh im embarrassed.
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