Carrie Richards Poet Rhyme

Jeweled Harvest

Prisms through haze,

disguise tawny fields

with a vague stained glass glaze,

leaving many small suns 

circling the cornstalks

throughout the maize




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For Nette's Contest: "Veil" -- Poems of Compression
By Carrie Richards

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Richard Lamoureux October 13, 2013 at 7:55 AM So well written, congratulations.

Poet Destroyer A October 10, 2013 at 8:26 PM Hi Carrie, ... Congratulations on your awesome win in Nette's contest... always~ LINDA

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders October 9, 2013 at 10:20 AM Beautiful imagery, Carrie! Congrats on your win! Love and blessings, Rhonda

Skat A October 8, 2013 at 8:21 PM lovely win Carrie..........SKAT

Sara Kendrick October 7, 2013 at 2:56 PM Uniquely you..Creative and descriptive winning lines.Congrats..Sara

Olusegun Arowolo October 6, 2013 at 12:35 PM Lovely and wonderful piece,great poet.Congrats on your well deserved win.

Andrea Dietrich October 6, 2013 at 1:23 AM I loved this from the beginning. Congrats for your gem!

Sandra Adams October 5, 2013 at 6:38 PM congrats on your fine win Carrie :)

Joyce Johnson October 5, 2013 at 5:39 PM Interesting and congratulations. Love, joyce

Kash Poet October 5, 2013 at 9:17 AM Loved it Carrie!Congrats on your win.

Nette Onclaud October 2, 2013 at 6:43 AM hi carrie, was passing though.. if this is for me, kindly put your name; part of the rules.. :) huggs

Kash Poet September 30, 2013 at 7:24 PM Wonderful approach to the theme of the contest Carrie!Loved this/

Andrea Dietrich September 28, 2013 at 10:57 PM How utterly beautiful. And you don't HAVE to be a meter maid to write good poetry. However, I notice when you DO write metered poetry, you are able to do it, That is the mark of a TRUE BLUE poet.

Kelly Deschler September 27, 2013 at 12:43 PM A delightful description of autumn's beauty! I really enjoyed reading this poem. Terrific writing, Carrie! I wish you good luck in the contest!...Thank you for the nice comments. I really appreciate it!

Debbie Guzzi September 27, 2013 at 9:28 AM Ahh yes the morning dew! Thanks so much for stopping by my verse. Light & Love

Dr.Ram Mehta September 27, 2013 at 4:08 AM Lilting expressions, Carrie