Jets Over Loch

blue grey clouds hang low;
   jets fly under cloud base
   screeching with joy

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 2/22/2014 4:56:00 PM
great imagery!
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Date: 1/22/2014 6:25:00 PM
Reads as if you are describing Her Majesty's air force on maneuvers.
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Linda Jackson
Date: 1/23/2014 11:24:00 AM
Yes, the jets usually fly over the loch twice a week. They have a break at Christmas, probably too full of Xmas pud to get into the cockpit. Linda x
Date: 10/23/2013 4:34:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..Sara
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