Jet's Exhaust

Exhaust Jet's etch a sketch 'Pon a clear horizon White elongated clouds eye shaped Exhaust

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Linda Jackson

Date: 11/12/2013 4:27:00 AM

I enjoyed your poem about the jet's exhaust. "Etch a sketch" is a nice description. Very best wishes Linda x

Ken Carroll

Date: 11/10/2013 3:25:00 PM

Hi Sara, lovely short description of a jets contrail.. Ken

Jack Horne

Date: 11/10/2013 1:32:00 PM

lovely descriptions, my friend

Poet. Undertaker

Date: 11/10/2013 8:18:00 AM

Sara ,jet's exhaust would have brought peace i believe. i mean the white smoke which is believed to be a symbol of peace. thanks for your visit and encouraging comments.(: ) Jenish.

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 11/10/2013 6:43:00 AM

Excellent. Very cleaver write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Nette Onclaud

Date: 11/9/2013 9:41:00 PM

a visual read that delights, sara... wonderful images abound!..:) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/9/2013 6:58:00 PM

this is really GREAT, Sara. Love the etch a sketch idea.

Jon A Cavanaugh

Date: 11/9/2013 5:43:00 PM

Very clever. Good write.

Russell Sivey

Date: 11/9/2013 12:09:00 PM

This is another picture perfect Cinquain my friend, you are very good at this form! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this afternoon! You have impressed me with this delightful piece! What a glorious poem, Great Work!!