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Jet's Exhaust

Exhaust
Jet's etch a sketch
'Pon a clear horizon
White elongated clouds eye shaped
Exhaust

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Linda Jackson

November 12, 2013 at 4:27 AM

I enjoyed your poem about the jet's exhaust. "Etch a sketch" is a nice description. Very best wishes Linda x

Ken Carroll

November 10, 2013 at 3:25 PM

Hi Sara, lovely short description of a jets contrail.. Ken

Jack Horne

November 10, 2013 at 1:32 PM

lovely descriptions, my friend

Poet. Undertaker

November 10, 2013 at 8:18 AM

Sara ,jet's exhaust would have brought peace i believe. i mean the white smoke which is believed to be a symbol of peace. thanks for your visit and encouraging comments.(: ) Jenish.

Ravi Sathasivam

November 10, 2013 at 6:43 AM

Excellent. Very cleaver write. Enjoyed. Tfs

Nette Onclaud

November 9, 2013 at 9:41 PM

a visual read that delights, sara... wonderful images abound!..:) huggs

Andrea Dietrich

November 9, 2013 at 6:58 PM

this is really GREAT, Sara. Love the etch a sketch idea.

Jon A Cavanaugh

November 9, 2013 at 5:43 PM

Very clever. Good write.

Russell Sivey

November 9, 2013 at 12:09 PM

This is another picture perfect Cinquain my friend, you are very good at this form! I really enjoyed reading this amazing poem this afternoon! You have impressed me with this delightful piece! What a glorious poem, Great Work!!

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