Jesusing

the world got blur,
so soft I could fall through blankets.
and time stopped.

it didn't know where to go...

for that night
you were god
and I was god

and we did all the things gods don't do.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Agustin Avatar
June 22, 2024 at 12:48 AM
I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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February 15, 2016 at 12:32 PM
INTERESTING... LINDA
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November 15, 2015 at 11:57 PM
Mirela, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing **SKAT**
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