Jesus Was a Jew

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Diminished Hexaverse
A poem containing stanzas of 5 lines, then 4 lines, then 3 lines, then 2 lines, ending with one word. The syllables in each stanza correspond to the number of lines, i.e. 5 in each line in the first stanza, 4 in the second stanza and so on.

As a child, I was sent to Sunday school to learned of Jesus, and how God sent Him to die for our sins. A Rabbi born the son of God. How ironic that we damn Jews for Christ's death, even though our Savior Jesus, was a Jew. (Diminished Hexaverse) 12, 16, 2019

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Beata Agustin

Date: 12/24/2019 4:09:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this; especially this fact highlighting truth:"How ironic, Christians damn Jews for Christ’s death, even though our Savior Jesus, was a Jew." God bless you.

Emile Pinet
Date: 12/24/2019 9:30:00 AM

Thanks Beata, Merry Christmas my friend, Emile.