Premiere Contest WinnerJesus, My Joy

Jesus is the joy of my life, full of grace and truth
His love was pure and holy, giving his all
For the sin of the world.  I accepted him in my youth.

My life was irrevocably changed when I heard his call
I adore Jesus, for he gives hope to all who are lost
Those who accept his wonderful gift shall never fall.

Faith is “Forgetting All, I Trust Him,” whatever the cost
Believing in Jesus, I know a peace that passes serenity
Throughout eternity my soul will never be tempest-tossed.

Having salvation is the goal, life’s supreme amenity
To know that I am safe throughout all eternity.

FIRST PLACE TROPHY WINNING POEM
written June 9, 2021
for "Jesus" Poetry Contest
sponsored by Regina McIntosh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Daniel Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 2:48 AM
A beautiful poem, Milton, congratulations on your trophy win:)
Hankins Avatar
July 13, 2021 at 8:39 AM
Jo, I really appreciated your kind comment. Thanks for the congrats.
Goldsmith Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 3:47 PM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! A beautiful story/write. Enjoy your win/day with blessings............
Hankins Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 5:18 PM
Thanks so much, Paula. I appreciate your lovely comment.
Agustin Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 2:02 AM
Amen to this. Congrats! Thanks for sharing your faith in the Lord and Saviour Jesus Christ. God bless you.
Hankins Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 5:19 PM
Thanks, Beata. I really appreciate your statement of faith.
Dutta Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 9:32 PM
BIG CONGRATS to win TOP. Best Wishes
Hankins Avatar
July 12, 2021 at 5:19 PM
Thanks, Anisha.
Seeker Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 8:48 PM
Congrats on your trophy win with this outstanding write, Milton! God bless
Hankins Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 9:06 PM
Unseeking Seeker, your kind thoughts are so appreciated. Thank you.
Mcintosh Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 4:18 PM
Congrats! Love this. God bless you always, Love, Gina
Hankins Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 7:24 PM
Thanks so much, Regina. I do love Jesus.
Roper Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 3:06 PM
Well said, Milton, without him my life would be like a ship on Turbulence waters. Congratulations on your win .
Hankins Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 7:25 PM
Thank you, Eve, for your thoughtful, kind comment.
Balasubramanian Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 10:35 AM
I read all your comments below and laughed. Noone can make out it is hypocrisy from your faith filled write. Congratulations on your trophy win. You deserve it even more now. Highly appreciate your frankness.
Hankins Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 10:41 AM
Thank you, Rama. I do love Jesus (He was a cool guy!), but I don't wear my religion on my sleeve and I don't buy into the "holier than thou" bit. And, I despise self-righteousness which is so prevalent these days in some "Christian" circles! Again, thanks for your comment.
Canerdy Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 10:02 AM
A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win with this deeply reverent poem, Milton. Janice
Hankins Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 10:03 AM
Thanks so much, Janice. I was astonished!
Edmonds  Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 9:51 AM
This was a joy to read Milton, your ticket to rise. Congratulations on your top spot win in Gina’s contest… Belle
Hankins Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 10:03 AM
Thank you, Belle. I was shocked by this win. I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Alex Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 9:48 AM
“Forgetting All, I Trust Him,” Beautiful. Congratulations!
Hankins Avatar
July 11, 2021 at 10:03 AM
Thanks, Christuraj.
Krutsinger Avatar
June 11, 2021 at 11:43 AM
Let's just throw this into everyone's favorite pile - the Christians anyway.
Hankins Avatar
June 11, 2021 at 12:06 PM
Caren, I felt like such a hypocrite! If you notice, I don't write much religious stuff anymore. I hope Gina doesn't read this. I'm doomed!
Agustin Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 9:47 PM
Thanks for sharing this wondrous testimony of yours (in your awesome poetic style) that exalts our Saviour and edifies fellow believers in Christ. God bless you.
Hankins Avatar
June 10, 2021 at 8:10 AM
Thanks, Beata. I appreciate your warm thoughts and comments on reading my poems.
Babcock Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 7:04 PM
Amen to this wonderful write. His love will never fail us. I like this wonderful inspirational write. love phyl
Hankins Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 7:16 PM
Thanks so much, Phyl. I am so happy you enjoyed my poem.
Logan Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 1:17 PM
I can hear voices in "Amen." It reads as a solemn witness to the life He gave for us.
Hankins Avatar
June 9, 2021 at 1:30 PM
Thanks so much, Jenna. I'm glad you liked and appreciated my poem.
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