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                              Church melodies wafted sweet and Holy
                                     Entering my heart in earliest life
                               

                              Joys song replaced with the melancholy
                           Forgetting grace, my mind was filled with strife
                           

                             But Jesus, You're the One who planted faith
                           Though sorrowed doubt cut deeply like a knife
                                 

                                  My robust spirit withered as a wraith
                              The fears ensued, I could no longer cope
                            

                             You then employed Your skillful Holy lathe
                                   Cutting away the lies till I had hope
                            

                             Your tools are sometimes painful to employ
                             You molded me and pulled me up the slope
                                

                                  I am now yours, I'm not a broken toy
                                 One day I'll stand upon Your Holy Hill
                          

                              Your faithfulness, my Lord, fills me with joy
                                   Glorious King, I long to do Your will
                                 

                                 Filled with Your Holy Spirit, as a dove
                         Above life's storms You whisper "Peace be still."
                           

                             I snuggle neath' Your pure and gentle love
                        Sweet melodies waft through my soul with grace
                          

                       Sometimes I dream they're echoes from above
                           I seek You as a bride her Husband's face
                       

                         Whose waited long and watches at the gate
                            Your love for me will never be displaced
            

                                 

                              Written for the 'Jesus' Poetry Contest
                                 Sponsored by Regina McIntosh

                                          Posted June 9, 2021

                 

Church melodies wafted sweet and Holy Entering my heart in earliest life Joys song replaced with the melancholy Forgetting grace, my mind was filled with strife But Jesus, You're the One who planted faith Though sorrowed doubt cut deeply like a knife My robust spirit withered as a wraith The fears ensued I could no longer cope You then employed Your skillful Holy lathe Cutting away the lies till I had hope Your tools are sometimes painful to employ You molded me and pulled me up the slope I am now yours, I'm not a broken toy One day I'll stand upon Your Holy Hill Your faithfulness, my Lord, fills me with joy Glorious King, I long to do Your will Filled with Your Holy Spirit, as a dove Above life's storms You whisper "Peace be still." I snuggle neath' Your pure and gentle love Sweet melodies waft through my soul with grace Sometimes I dream they're echoes from above I seek You as a bride her Husband's face Whose waited long and watches at the gate Your love for me will never be displaced

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Date: 12/12/2022 7:31:00 AM
This is beautiful, For when He enters and dwells within, we are pulled out this wicked world with a new vision , love and joy. The peace be still, is to remind one He's got you , no more worries of all the chaos going around, these things must happen for the world in a whole to be broken down, to see man is the beast that goes against God.
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Date: 11/4/2021 12:41:00 PM
The best lines in the poem for me were "Filled with Your Holy Spirit , as a dove Above life's storms You whisper "Peace be still." As you know I have become more in touch with The Lord, Our Savior in the last few weeks and I am learning that it is through faith and belief that we need to live. This is a beautiful poem. Your friend, Evelyn
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Date: 10/17/2021 3:20:00 PM
I enjoyed reading this contest entry. I think Regina will really like it. Reads like a good contender to me. Way to go. Your presence at my page was assuring. Sara
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Date: 6/15/2021 6:11:00 AM
Very inspirational. How good to love Jesus. God bless.
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/15/2021 11:50:00 AM
Thank you Victor! Yes, it is wonderful, and even better is being loved by Him! "For God so loved the world that He gave His only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in Him should not perish, but have eternal life. ~John 3:16 That is truly inspirational! God bless you too Victor! Thank you for your kind comment!
Date: 6/14/2021 4:43:00 AM
Excellent verse my friend. Hope it wins for you. I'm sure it wins with Jesus. Love this. God Bless, JB
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/15/2021 2:02:00 AM
Thank you Judy, God bless you as well! <3
Date: 6/12/2021 9:00:00 PM
Wonderful write. All the best for contest. PS - Since notes section cannot be seen by sponsors, why don't you put what you have put in notes section down. Then hold will be visible to Regina.
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 7/6/2021 1:57:00 PM
Rama <3 Thank you for trying to help me to make my letters bold for the words. I finally did figure it out. I went to google and found a copy and paste bold letter generator. I am so relieved, because I guess the notes section cannot be seen by the poetry sponsor. I hope you are having a lovely day <3 I have tried to Soup Mail you and I cannot get it to work for some reason.
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Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/13/2021 8:01:00 PM
So far, making my words bold is eluding me, no matter what I do, so I will do what you did I think, and try some other way to draw attention. Even when I use notepad and try to apply the poem with bold letter it isn't working. Thank you for reaching out with your helpful suggestions. I don't know why I am having so much difficulty with this!

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