Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Poet Verse

Jesus Help Me - Written By My Seven-Year-Old Son, Dylan

Jesus help me with my 
problems that I have each day.
When I go through many 
things everyday -
like school, listening and grades.
Jesus also help me to be
a great big brother 
and a great son to my
mother and father
and a friend to all.


By Dylan Saunders

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Wilma Neels December 19, 2014 at 2:53 AM This is an absolute gem from Dylan, Rhonda ;) beautiful prayer xx

Richard Lamoureux December 8, 2014 at 7:45 AM What a wonderful heartfelt prayer. I believe God answered this one in advance.

Paul Callus December 8, 2014 at 5:22 AM Well done Dylan!!! I can tell by this poem that you are a very good and clever boy. I hope that you will keep on writing, and read as much as you can. I am giving you a 7 rating to show you how much I enjoyed reading your sweet poem. // paul

Brenda Meier-Hans December 7, 2014 at 7:39 PM Hi Dylan. You made me so happy that I could read one of your poems. You are already starting to be a great poet and I hope to see you here more often. You have a beautiful heart that I can see and I know Jesus can also see it and he will always be at your side when you ask him. Your friend and fellow poet Brenda.

Robert Lindley December 7, 2014 at 6:59 PM Please tell that future great poet to keep on writing. His wisdom and sharing is an inspiration to one and all! Giving this fine poem a solid 7 !!

Maurice Yvonne December 7, 2014 at 4:20 AM Dylan I really love your poem. How talented you are. Best of all you write from your heart. I give this poem the highest mark possible. I am also adding it to my list of favorite poems. This way I can read it everyday. You must feel very proud. What a great poet you are.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders December 6, 2014 at 10:13 PM Thank you everyone for your comments! Dylan will be so excited when he reads them tomorrow. BIG hugs to all, Rhonda

David Meade December 6, 2014 at 8:42 PM Sweet is the prayer of a child -- all heaven rejoices -- walk boldly and confidently -- Dylan has covered you with prayer!! Does he take prayer request??

Andrea Dietrich December 6, 2014 at 8:39 PM Your seven year old is wise beyond his years. Tell him GREAT POEM.

Tim Smith December 6, 2014 at 6:34 PM An awesome poem from Dylan...give him my kudos...hugs Tim

Jan Allison December 6, 2014 at 6:05 PM aww so so cute a prayer god bless him:-) Hugs Jan xxx