Jesus Christ

We can't forget the christ,
 but  christmas must come !
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Deo Avatar
April 15, 2017 at 6:33 AM
Thanks; Anne-Lise is correct. You can do the 17 syllables in other formats. But, usually three lines (5 syllables, 7 sylls, 5 sylls). Now, it's Happy Easter to me and everybody. God bless you STREET POET. And I am happy to tell U that Jesus Loves you, and has the best Fire Insurance Policy with Dividends built-in. Anil Deo
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December 17, 2016 at 7:58 AM
- Lovely written, Street Poet - (I'm no expert ... but I do not think this is a haiku poem - Haiku has three lines 5-7-5- syllable) - Happy weekend and best wishes for a peaceful and beautiful Christmas to you and your family :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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December 17, 2016 at 8:49 AM
Thanks for your wishes and kind suggetions dear. And Merry Christmas to u and your family. Next time I will follow the actual writing form.
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