Jesus

Jesus Shepherd of my fugitive spirit shower “grace,” Emmanuel’s “joy” to hollow “life” in “holy” art, As nail scarred hands I adore in tender embrace. Selfless servant your signature of “faith” impart, Word, as Judah’s Lion enfold this thirsting deer To caress my uncircumcised and rowdy heart. I sink into profound omnipotence -“love” so near, Anointed “hope,” slow to anger, flows stellar Pure compassion heals blind deafness -miracles clear Crucified gentle dove reconcile my residue of scars - In nascent dawns dedicated to the living Daystar. 6-9-21 Contest: Jesus Sponsor: Regina McIntosh Prompt words Holy, hope, life, joy, grace, love, faith 6-8-21 Contest: Jesus Sponsor: Regina McIntosh Couldn’t get bold or italics to work so I put the prompt words in parentheses.

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Bj Legros Kelley

Date: 6/12/2021 1:53:00 PM

This is radiant and lovely!

Bj Legros Kelley
Date: 6/12/2021 2:00:00 PM

Also, I noticed how you did the prompt words, that was a good idea. I too tried everything to make the words bold. I did eventually find that there is a 'notes' box located beneath the box where we actually write. From that box we can add a picture as well as have tools to use.... but only for notes. There I used the wonderful box and was able to make bold the prompt words. I still had to use the box for poetry though, because otherwise nothing posted for anyone else to see! Hope this helps in the future. I don't know how others have managed that, though I see somehow others have been able to do it!

Joanna Daniel

Date: 6/9/2021 10:32:00 PM

Brilliant, sure to place high, Sam:) love the way you included some titles of Lord Jesus:)

Sam Kauffman
Date: 6/10/2021 9:57:00 AM

Thank you so much Jo. Quite a challenge to describe the immense person of Jesus, and our relationship, in a few words. The titles I used are among my favorites, especially Emmanuel and Daystar. We are blessed to work at His side. Blessings to you.