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Jerusha's Rubicon

Family unity, ties bound with conditions Cult peoples kept from alternate climates Narrow track administered to every woman Mother of two, Jerusha determined to fight it Prospect of allowed departure non existant Packed full backpacks for herself, Cain, Ismail Heart racingly taken, stealth taxi whisked them Latitude of escape seeped freedom's keen prevail Struggle of forging a semblance in society Paled compared with Jerusha' s jubilation Diversified choice shone a light on prior piety Ripened reap of fertile fields found by escaping Six months settling into life saw boys blossom School begun by bandaid kneed lads excited Sad to have severed contact, Dad lost to them Replaced by opportunities they were entitled An impartial education incorporated science In its teaching of evolving technology's input Explanations purely made in Creation reliance Promote terror of broken Eden original sin took Short lived richness enjoyed by dear Jerusha Boys' kidnap had spurred a furious response Their father oversaw their screamed removal Assisted by six men of member prominence Strongest longing held her swayed relentlessly Rainbow arranged Hot Wheels remained parked Displayed in Ismail's obsessive pattern tendency Teddy bear choir piled on bed, Cain's care harked Oh God! What had she done... Surely this was not His Way... Jerusha's stupid decision to run Put her heart in harpoon hooked pain 24th August For Rob Carmack's Cold - Quiet Now Song Poetry Contest

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Date: 9/24/2020 6:26:00 AM
'Sigrid, Congratulations on your first place finish. Powerful emotional narrative capped with "harpoon hooked pain." David.'
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Date: 9/23/2020 8:58:00 PM
What a tale... Merge with modern desires, fears... Love the kids toys description,.a very heartfelt scene. Congratulations on your first place. Jeanne
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/24/2020 12:10:00 AM
Oh, thank you so much for your time reading, Jeanne. Appreciate your comment.
Date: 9/23/2020 6:23:00 PM
Sigrid, CONGRATS on your top win with this vividly descriptive narrative poem relating a harrowing story. Janice
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/24/2020 12:09:00 AM
Thanks so much, Janice
Date: 9/23/2020 5:13:00 PM
Congrats to my newest favorite writer. Thank you for supporting my contest.
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/24/2020 12:11:00 AM
My absolute pleasure! Thanks for hosting, Rob. Hope to see msny more from you.... Yeah, clip watch again makes topic easy to embellish.
Date: 8/24/2020 8:02:00 PM
This allusion-laden write is quite amazing, esp. the back-and-forth between Biblical cataclysm and modern dilemmas. Write on, Sigrid! Regrets and Repentance, Gershon
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/25/2020 5:34:00 AM
Yo, cheers, Gershon. I deeply appreciate your perception. Good to know it has a bit of shock factor. Ta friend.

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