Jerusha's Rubicon

Family unity, ties bound with conditions
Cult peoples kept from alternate climates
Narrow track administered to every woman
Mother of two, Jerusha determined to fight it

Prospect of allowed departure non existant
Packed full backpacks for herself, Cain, Ismail 
Heart racingly taken, stealth taxi whisked them
Latitude of escape seeped freedom's keen prevail

Struggle of forging a semblance in society
Paled compared with Jerusha' s jubilation
Diversified choice shone a light on prior piety
Ripened reap of fertile fields found by escaping

Six months settling into life saw boys blossom
School begun by bandaid kneed lads excited
Sad to have severed contact, Dad lost to them 
Replaced by opportunities they were entitled

An impartial education incorporated science 
In its teaching of evolving technology's input
Explanations purely made in Creation reliance
Promote terror of broken Eden original sin took 

Short lived richness enjoyed by dear Jerusha
Boys' kidnap had spurred a furious response
Their father oversaw their screamed removal
Assisted by six men of member prominence

Strongest longing held her swayed relentlessly
Rainbow arranged Hot Wheels remained parked
Displayed in Ismail's obsessive pattern tendency
Teddy bear choir piled on bed, Cain's care harked

Oh God! What had she done... 
Surely this was not His Way... 
Jerusha's stupid decision to run
Put her heart in harpoon hooked pain 



24th August

For Rob Carmack's
Cold -  Quiet Now Song Poetry Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020



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Date: 9/24/2020 6:26:00 AM
'Sigrid, Congratulations on your first place finish. Powerful emotional narrative capped with "harpoon hooked pain." David.'
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Date: 9/23/2020 8:58:00 PM
What a tale... Merge with modern desires, fears... Love the kids toys description,.a very heartfelt scene. Congratulations on your first place. Jeanne
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/24/2020 12:10:00 AM
Oh, thank you so much for your time reading, Jeanne. Appreciate your comment.
Date: 9/23/2020 6:23:00 PM
Sigrid, CONGRATS on your top win with this vividly descriptive narrative poem relating a harrowing story. Janice
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/24/2020 12:09:00 AM
Thanks so much, Janice
Date: 9/23/2020 5:13:00 PM
Congrats to my newest favorite writer. Thank you for supporting my contest.
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 9/24/2020 12:11:00 AM
My absolute pleasure! Thanks for hosting, Rob. Hope to see msny more from you.... Yeah, clip watch again makes topic easy to embellish.
Date: 8/24/2020 8:02:00 PM
This allusion-laden write is quite amazing, esp. the back-and-forth between Biblical cataclysm and modern dilemmas. Write on, Sigrid! Regrets and Repentance, Gershon
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 8/25/2020 5:34:00 AM
Yo, cheers, Gershon. I deeply appreciate your perception. Good to know it has a bit of shock factor. Ta friend.
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