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Jerkasaurus

I was reading a poem/song today When I finished reading I thought…hey What number should I give him to rate? Everything was great, except the slight awkward part on the chorus The CAPTCHA told me to “PUT4”…what a jerkasaurus.

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John Rhinem

Date: 5/9/2012 5:48:00 PM

Smile ˜ Hahaha, I Always Have Enjoyed The Liberty Extended Unto Creative Written Verse; Be It Amid Any Light, My Dear Precious & Beautiful Laura * I Am A Constant 7's Kind Of Guy ˜ Very Pretty & Hopefully Your Beauty Enjoyed Their Song? Also, Thank You For The Kind Visit; Much Appreciated ˜ My Love to You, John!:) ˜

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 5/9/2012 6:14:00 PM

Oh, and yes, the song was great! 8)

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 5/9/2012 5:56:00 PM

Awwwuh! Well, thanks! :)

Honestly J.T.

Date: 3/1/2012 8:28:00 PM

very unique I must say. good write!- JH

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 3/1/2012 8:33:00 PM

Thank you very much. (:

James Marshall Goff

Date: 2/6/2012 9:22:00 PM

original, building momentum with creativity! jimbo

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/10/2012 1:35:00 PM

:D Thankies!

Karen Deeks

Date: 2/6/2012 12:05:00 AM

Ha ha ha ha!! I can't believe I'm laughing at six am... At the same time I feel awkward as I keep forgetting to rate but I know the word jerkasaurus will remind me. Thanks for some light refreshment... Karen

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/10/2012 1:36:00 PM

I'm glad you got a smile outah it. ;)

J Eliza James

Date: 2/5/2012 11:11:00 PM

What a great vision the Jerkasaurus emits, bit like a huge kangaroo 'walking' through a flooded plane. Rhyming and singing poetry or song Puts smiles and pleasure where they belong; in the world! Wordancer And what is 'Rating' and why?

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/6/2012 1:43:00 PM

You can rate someone's work 1-7. One being "poorly written" and seven being "excellently written". It is just above the comment box. You don't have to rate, but I do occasionally, especially when I like a poem a lot. Rating someone's work gives the writer an idea of how the general public thinks of their piece. (This can also help them improve if they so wish for improvement)

Don Johnson

Date: 2/4/2012 11:21:00 PM

long as it rhymes an staggers in time, an poetry is yes, inspiration, you can check for a bit, of bull in me line, poetry comes from thought distillation, produces wine or a whine, till the cementry chimes, words come on the next inhalation, sometimes...

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/10/2012 1:36:00 PM

You people with rhyming comments rock meh socks. Just saying.

J Eliza James
Date: 2/5/2012 11:05:00 PM

or after we/I swallow the afore mentioned fermentation! wordancer

Rebecca Larkin

Date: 2/4/2012 11:04:00 PM

hahahahahahahaha! "What da efff" hahaha Love it!

Laura Breidenthal
Date: 2/4/2012 11:06:00 PM

Hahahahah!!! It DID though! (: