Jerimiah

Jerimiah

When you were born the doctors said you did not have long.
But your loving heart proved them wrong.
Your determination and will touched everyone near.
God gave you your bright red hair and big blue eyes so dear.
He also gave you a heart of pure gold.
Made you the baby everyone wanted to hold.
You never meet a stranger and everyone was your friend.
You never gave up giving to others even if it meant you did without again.
Now you’re wearing those wings you always hid.
The ones you have had since you was just a kid.
Wear them with pride and that crooked grin.
Know we will all work hard to see you again.
With our thoughts of you and what you would have done.
We will make your loving heart carry on.
We will ask ourselves every day. What would Jay Jay, do or say.

  
writen for my sister who lost her son in june we will love and remeber him always 
          Jerimiah J. Ellingwood  Oct 24, 1981 to june 9, 2010

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 12/18/2010 6:04:00 PM
Smile!? ~ A very passionate & stirring poe my dear; straight from the heart & soul it seems; "Bluebright & Beautiful" ~ I am quite certain that Jeremiah shall be "Forever & Always" within, "A Paradise That Shall Never End!!!" ~ "'Love & Warmth,' Always," John!:) ~
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