Jephetto

I was brought up in 
shadows

parents vacant

a ghostly father
mostly heard

Mom said: “later”

pain & confusion was my legacy
Living broken was my creed

spending life times in counseling 
just longing to find Jephetto

the one that fixes broken toys…

miraculously found in Christ
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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April 19, 2016 at 12:09 AM
Ron C, nicely done. Glad to read your poem today. XoX *Linda*
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January 31, 2010 at 12:20 PM
This is definitely a very inspiration write. I like the comparison between jephetto and Christ because Jephetto was willing to give up his life to fine Pinocchio as Christ did for us. Great implied analogy.
Winter Avatar
March 22, 2009 at 7:13 AM
Wow. Such an incredible write. Cannot wait to read your book - and cannot say enough about this poem! Sad, so sad with a most happy ending. Awesome title and analogy. Love, Shar
Mcallion Avatar
March 22, 2009 at 5:35 AM
An excellent write. So much emotion here, it really seeps through.
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