Jephetto

I was brought up in shadows parents vacant a ghostly father mostly heard Mom said: “later” pain & confusion was my legacy Living broken was my creed spending life times in counseling just longing to find Jephetto the one that fixes broken toys… miraculously found in Christ

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/19/2016 12:09:00 AM

Ron C, nicely done. Glad to read your poem today. XoX *Linda*

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 1/31/2010 12:20:00 PM

This is definitely a very inspiration write. I like the comparison between jephetto and Christ because Jephetto was willing to give up his life to fine Pinocchio as Christ did for us. Great implied analogy.

Sharon Winter

Date: 3/22/2009 7:13:00 AM

Wow. Such an incredible write. Cannot wait to read your book - and cannot say enough about this poem! Sad, so sad with a most happy ending. Awesome title and analogy. Love, Shar

Kevin Mcallion

Date: 3/22/2009 5:35:00 AM

An excellent write. So much emotion here, it really seeps through.