Jenny's Gems

So shy was she – this woman he had met
by chatting sometimes on the internet.
She had to work while raising on her own
two children whom she often left alone
because she worked two jobs to make ends meet.
And though the kids were teens, she felt defeat
for rarely getting to spend time with them.
He got to know her better. Such a gem
was Jenny, whom he wished that he could see.
He knew her mostly from the poetry
she posted, but she rarely could find time
to work the magic that she made with rhyme.

It came to him how he might make her smile.
He gathered up the poems in her best style
and got them printed in a pretty book.
Painstakingly he did this work. It took
him seven weeks. Right before her birthday
he sent it out before time got away!
The book arrived. The girl he now knew well
went out to see it sitting in the mail.
The title was so sweet tears filled her eyes.
Now “Jenny’s Gems” is her most treasured prize.

May 20, 2021
For the All Yours (Jun 14) Poetry Contest of Brian Strand
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Pathak Avatar
June 15, 2021 at 9:50 PM
A gripping narrative style, rhyme-wise or otherwise, congrats for the win.
Alex Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 6:42 AM
You write so beautifully. Congratulations to you may be just my formality.
Gaul Avatar
June 14, 2021 at 6:13 AM
Andrea, you are the gem. You lay it out so clearly, I fear if it is not true then it may be a cry. So sad if that is so. So great if the story is true. This kind of awakened sentiment cannot help but find a kindred spirit. It's in everything you've written that I've seen but none more openly than this one. Poetic hugs.
Norton Avatar
June 13, 2021 at 10:21 PM
I love your story poems. They are lonely without a book of their own. This is one of them. Thank you for sharing. Meanwhile, I just wrote my 8 contest poems for the day. Thanks for the inspiration! Luv, Bryan
Y. Avatar
May 24, 2021 at 10:55 PM
WoW! Andrea, You penned such a well written and creative write. I enjoyed the story from start to finish. I saw a bit of myself in this poem. That was such a heartfelt and lovely gift. Congrats in advance;-) Alexis
Marcum Wong Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 4:35 PM
This is so creative Andrea. You made a whole scenario around the theme he gave her a book. I am sure this will be a top winner. I love the sentimentality. Blessings Connie xxoo
Proxenos Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 8:59 AM
Hi Andrea, her name is Jenny and his love for her and his endearing nature won her over - my husband was in my heart always from our early twenties, although married another and divorced still always thought of Elias until he phoned our offices on day in May 20 years ago, and I overheards our receptionist, saying who may I say is calling and when she said Elias Proxenos, i knew this was for real, we got married on the 10th December 2000. I'm so glad for your friend Jenny. Hugs, blessings Jenn.
Dietrich Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 10:59 AM
wow, what a great story.
Kelly Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 7:47 AM
We should all be so lucky! Great story telling, Andrea.
Jayasankar Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 5:41 AM
Wow such a beautiful story... lovely gift that she would treasure... truly a gem... God bless... Best wishes Andrea... Hugs... ~ Ani
Kannan Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 3:10 AM
What a lovely gift!!! Great story... Good luck in the contest...
Rodrigues Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 3:18 PM
So pretty! Very nice!
Theraven Avatar
May 22, 2021 at 10:06 AM
Andrea, The best birthday present; the one they never expected. I like your use of the painstaking 'seven' weeks it took to craft it. My niece sent a similar wonderful gift for my birthday. It too was a book of poetry. One titled 'Where the Sidewalk Ends'. -Richard
Theraven Avatar
May 23, 2021 at 2:35 PM
Oh.., 'Blue eyes, laughin' in the sun ~ Laughin' in the rain Baby's got blue eyes ~ And I am home, and I am home again'... -R
Daniel Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 10:42 PM
Wow! That's so sweet and thoughtful of anyone to do, Jenny was really blessed to have found him:) a sure winner, Andrea:)
Canerdy Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 8:47 PM
This is a GREAT narrative poem, Andrea--so moving. I thoroughly enjoyed it. Janice
Merryman Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 7:44 PM
A great story, Andrea! It seems perfect for the contest. Blessings, Kim M
Devonshire Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 8:23 AM
A truly delightful story in your poem, Andrea. I'm sure the book of her poems will always be special to her. Best wishes for a win in Mystic Rose's contest! Hugs, Carolyn
Pandit Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 4:45 AM
What a lovely gift!
Buhagiar Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 1:39 AM
Full of emotions. Jenny is like me if I understood it well. Poor at rhymes. Best for a win.
Dietrich Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 7:16 AM
I think you did not understand it right. She is a rhyming poet who has no time to write like she wants to.
Cunningham Avatar
May 21, 2021 at 1:18 AM
A lovely heartwarming story Andrea, good luck in the contest. Tom
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