Jennifer's Dawn...

I can see the dawn, 
                                       southern shades of blue
                                   Trees and birds begin to stir
                                       She lays asleep
                               
                                    I can see your face
                                      Southern shades of blue
                                         Turning to me
                                      You awaken slowly
         
                                     Suspended between thoughts 
                                              And dreams
                                    A land where I know you

                                    I can see a star
                                Your light in my darkness
                                      Southern shades of you
                                    A found lost land of love
                                        The place where I hold you....
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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May 27, 2009 at 10:20 AM
this piece is awesome! … keep your passionate pen walking and working on your poetry pad. Great you!
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