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Jellyfish Drifting

Jellyfish drifting. 
Outstretched tentacles floating –
Too soon washed ashore.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

July 19, 2010 at 8:17 AM

Congratulations Dane Ann on your well deserved win in Susan Mill's contest "Jellyfish at the Beach". Love, Carol

James Fraser

July 18, 2010 at 8:19 AM

Many congratulations Dane Ann on your win in Susan's fine contest >> James

Carolyn Devonshire

July 13, 2010 at 5:04 PM

Great haiku, Dane Ann. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

July 13, 2010 at 3:42 PM

Congrats Dane Ann on your HM in the Jellyfish contest with this wonderful entry.. to do this in Haiku is unique and interesting.. enjoy your very special honor my friend.. with luv..

Joseph Spence Sr

July 9, 2010 at 2:59 PM

The imagery in this poem is creative. One would certainly don't want to touch those tentacles. I know the feeling about being washed ashore too soon, especially when they are all over the beachs. Great job! Joseph

Andrea Dietrich

July 9, 2010 at 1:23 PM

I love this one, Dane Ann. wow, it 's great. Now I need to get started on one of my own! I sure hope you feel better and get back here PRONTO. LUv, Andrea

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