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Jellyfish Drifting

Jellyfish drifting. Outstretched tentacles floating – Too soon washed ashore.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 7/19/2010 8:17:00 AM
Congratulations Dane Ann on your well deserved win in Susan Mill's contest "Jellyfish at the Beach". Love, Carol
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Date: 7/18/2010 8:19:00 AM
Many congratulations Dane Ann on your win in Susan's fine contest >> James
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Date: 7/13/2010 5:04:00 PM
Great haiku, Dane Ann. Congratulations on your placement in the contest! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/13/2010 3:42:00 PM
Congrats Dane Ann on your HM in the Jellyfish contest with this wonderful entry.. to do this in Haiku is unique and interesting.. enjoy your very special honor my friend.. with luv..
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Date: 7/9/2010 2:59:00 PM
The imagery in this poem is creative. One would certainly don't want to touch those tentacles. I know the feeling about being washed ashore too soon, especially when they are all over the beachs. Great job! Joseph
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Date: 7/9/2010 1:23:00 PM
I love this one, Dane Ann. wow, it 's great. Now I need to get started on one of my own! I sure hope you feel better and get back here PRONTO. LUv, Andrea
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