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jellyfish back strophe

she disturbs meaning
in rhythmic pulsation
exciting to fluorescence a deeply subtext'd verse;
'but don't mistake a stinging strophe for arrogance.'

'that's just fierce presence,'
moved by waves of astonishment 
cascading through a nervous and vascular system
spontaneously overflowed  

                                          sea through

with a reaching iridescent tentacle
she simply, elegantly, fluoresces a gleam in your eyes

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 6/18/2009 5:28:00 PM
wonderful words..breathtaking..going into my fav's Light & Love
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Date: 6/7/2009 7:55:00 PM
amazing write.
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Date: 5/10/2009 2:07:00 PM
our heroes are conflicted, hanging cross-wise ,riddled with choices, pock-marks on their skin, topographically hardened by the spirit of humanity
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Date: 5/9/2009 9:44:00 PM
Very imaginative write, Jerry! Nice work
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Date: 5/9/2009 5:04:00 PM
Jerry, my brother, my poet, my friend, what an awesome talent here shown ... what a rich supply of genius in elegance over flown ... high praises, sir.
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Date: 5/9/2009 4:34:00 PM
Niiice! well written and very enjoyable to read!
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