Jellybeans

The silver jellybeans I wore were the toy.
      These shoes caused jealousy from my brother.
Just as the lemon twist did from the other.

      Beside the house, he walked in my jellybeans.
My mother watched not saying anything.
      The other brother took my lemon twist.
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Penned on May 06, 2014!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Krutsinger Avatar
May 10, 2019 at 3:19 AM
This made me smile. I am picturing those jelly beans!
Bangalee Avatar
May 9, 2019 at 4:05 AM
beautiful expression
Lamoureux Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 11:46 AM
As a child I too would covet what my brother and sister received, it always felt like theirs was somehow better. I enjoyed your little story.
Walker  Avatar
May 7, 2014 at 12:55 PM
Thanks Rick and a story it is... Verlena :0))s.
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