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I got stung by a Jellyfish a few years back and that was a horrible experience..Sara

Jelly Fish On Shore

jelly fish on shore
abandoned by ebbing wave..
summer sun rises

Traditional Haiku
Count 5/7/5
Word that tells the season
Has a cut with ...to tell where cut is located
It uses no capitols(which my whole being says no to doing.)
Written by: Sara Kendrick
Contest: Haiku From The Heart
Sponsor: Sidney~LeeAnn
I found some more interesting 
facts about Haiku
doing some research..

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Carol Sunshine Brown Date: 4/16/2012 11:07:00 AM Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Sidney~LeeAnn's "Haiku From The Heart" contest Sara. Love, Carol Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 4/13/2012 10:51:00 PM congrats on an awesome write and win Sara..luv.. Login to Reply

Poet Destroyer A Date: 4/13/2012 10:13:00 PM Sara, , a wonderful congratulations.. with this awesome poem * good night. :-) always~ PD Login to Reply

Joann Grisetti Date: 4/13/2012 6:45:00 PM Congratulations. In this haiku, the cut is implied by the switch from the wave to the sun. but I like the ellipsis reminds me of footprints in the sand. Login to Reply

Deborah Burch Date: 4/13/2012 6:23:00 PM Congratulations Sara on your win!! My son is at the beach this week and he and his daughter found a jellyfish on the shoreline...says they brought it back to life and wanted to know if I wanted it!!! lol...Big hugsss--love,deb Login to Reply

Matthew Anish Date: 4/6/2012 6:55:00 AM I remeber seeing jelly fish on the shore and your poem evokes that recollection. Please stay away from Portugese Man of War so you can keep writing good poetry! Peace & Love Matthew Anish Login to Reply

Jack Horne Date: 3/28/2012 1:19:00 PM poor thing - will it survive? clever haiku, Sara. I must say I prefer traditional haiku so far Login to Reply

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 3/28/2012 1:28:00 AM A great traditional haiku, Sara! You truly captured a moment in nature. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda Login to Reply

Russell Sivey Date: 3/27/2012 12:02:00 PM This is a fantastic write my friend! We all know what the "summer sun..." to an abandoned jelly fish would mean to the jelly fish...quite a smell it would create! This poem is perfect for the contest, you will do well in the contest! Great Work!! Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 3/27/2012 11:59:00 AM A wery good haiku Sara. - oxox Anne-Lise Login to Reply

Kim Merryman Date: 3/27/2012 10:05:00 AM Great haiku, Sara. You have created a very distinct visual scene. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim Login to Reply

Harry Horsman Date: 3/27/2012 10:04:00 AM Like this Sara, harry Login to Reply

Daver Austin Date: 3/27/2012 10:03:00 AM Oh, there is food for continuing thought in this one. Imagining the sun bake - folks happening on the sight. Great Haiku. Love, daver Login to Reply

Linda-Marie Sweetheart Date: 3/27/2012 9:18:00 AM down the seashore at home in NJ we see many jelly fish there by shore line.. these words depict that scene so well Sara.. good luck in contest luv.. Login to Reply

Ilene Bauer Date: 3/27/2012 8:12:00 AM nice one! very easy to picture from your words. Login to Reply

Chittaranjan Dey Date: 3/27/2012 7:56:00 AM Very nice my dear poetic lady. Login to Reply

Doris Culverhouse Date: 3/27/2012 7:05:00 AM no you have a haik? is singular? only one poem. I wrote a poem called Monday for Rude Becky....check it out! Login to Reply Doris Culverhouse Date: 3/27/2012 7:05:00 AM haikus?