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I got stung by a Jellyfish a few years back and that was a horrible experience..Sara

jelly fish on shore abandoned by ebbing wave.. summer sun rises Traditional Haiku Count 5/7/5 Word that tells the season Has a cut with ...to tell where cut is located It uses no capitols(which my whole being says no to doing.) Written by: Sara Kendrick Contest: Haiku From The Heart Sponsor: Sidney~LeeAnn I found some more interesting facts about Haiku doing some research..

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 4/16/2012 11:07:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Sidney~LeeAnn's "Haiku From The Heart" contest Sara. Love, Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/13/2012 10:51:00 PM

congrats on an awesome write and win Sara..luv..

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/13/2012 10:13:00 PM

Sara, , a wonderful congratulations.. with this awesome poem * good night. :-) always~ PD

Joann Grisetti

Date: 4/13/2012 6:45:00 PM

Congratulations. In this haiku, the cut is implied by the switch from the wave to the sun. but I like the ellipsis reminds me of footprints in the sand.

Deborah Burch

Date: 4/13/2012 6:23:00 PM

Congratulations Sara on your win!! My son is at the beach this week and he and his daughter found a jellyfish on the shoreline...says they brought it back to life and wanted to know if I wanted it!!! lol...Big hugsss--love,deb

Matthew Anish

Date: 4/6/2012 6:55:00 AM

I remeber seeing jelly fish on the shore and your poem evokes that recollection. Please stay away from Portugese Man of War so you can keep writing good poetry! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Jack Horne

Date: 3/28/2012 1:19:00 PM

poor thing - will it survive? clever haiku, Sara. I must say I prefer traditional haiku so far

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/28/2012 1:28:00 AM

A great traditional haiku, Sara! You truly captured a moment in nature. Best wishes in the contest. Blessings, Rhonda

Russell Sivey

Date: 3/27/2012 12:02:00 PM

This is a fantastic write my friend! We all know what the "summer sun..." to an abandoned jelly fish would mean to the jelly fish...quite a smell it would create! This poem is perfect for the contest, you will do well in the contest! Great Work!!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/27/2012 11:59:00 AM

A wery good haiku Sara. - oxox Anne-Lise

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/27/2012 10:05:00 AM

Great haiku, Sara. You have created a very distinct visual scene. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim

Harry Horsman

Date: 3/27/2012 10:04:00 AM

Like this Sara, harry

Daver Austin

Date: 3/27/2012 10:03:00 AM

Oh, there is food for continuing thought in this one. Imagining the sun bake - folks happening on the sight. Great Haiku. Love, daver

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/27/2012 9:18:00 AM

down the seashore at home in NJ we see many jelly fish there by shore line.. these words depict that scene so well Sara.. good luck in contest luv..