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Jelly Fish

A creature so very divine, This creature must be mine, It’s colors so very hazy, It’s arms make me crazy, Yet it’s all so very define.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/8/2016 3:04:00 AM

jack brommely, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. ~LINDA~

Skat A

Date: 8/23/2015 11:50:00 PM

:) SKAT

Skat A

Date: 7/4/2015 12:23:00 AM

Jack, stumbled across this poem. Thanks for sharing. Have yourself a safe and Happy 4th of July.... Love SKAT

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/25/2011 7:32:00 AM

Lovely humor with ubnforced rhyming. Please give little once over to the syllable count of Limerick, jack

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/20/2011 6:26:00 AM

Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your amazing creative write... hope u have fun on P.S. as u continue to share with luv and humor ..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/20/2011 3:56:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jack. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol