Jelly Fish

A creature so very divine,
This creature must be mine,
It’s colors so very hazy,
It’s arms make me crazy,
Yet it’s all so very define.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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April 8, 2016 at 3:04 AM
jack brommely, you've expressed yourself well, I enjoyed your poem. ~LINDA~
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August 23, 2015 at 11:50 PM
:) SKAT
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July 4, 2015 at 12:23 AM
Jack, stumbled across this poem. Thanks for sharing. Have yourself a safe and Happy 4th of July.... Love SKAT
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May 25, 2011 at 7:32 AM
Lovely humor with ubnforced rhyming. Please give little once over to the syllable count of Limerick, jack
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May 20, 2011 at 6:26 AM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your amazing creative write... hope u have fun on P.S. as u continue to share with luv and humor ..
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May 20, 2011 at 3:56 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Jack. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol
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